August 25th, 2016 at 10:19pm
I'm here because of the comment swap :-)
So I have only seen the first Prophecy and I thought it was fairly good. My husband and I bought this box set of strange movie and it just happened to be on there. So now I keep picturing all the characters in your story as Christopher Walken lol. But I picture Clair as Katie Hudsen, with the wavy blonde hair. I dig it haha. I also picture your vampires as the nasty mirror monsters from Constantine. Love me some Keanu Reeves lol
Your writing is very impressive, I feel like you describe things very well and the story is interesting. I don't believe in the bible really but I do enjoy stories based off it like yours and Constantine and Prophecy. There are some areas of your story that seemed a little rushed but for the most part it does well. Also maybe describe each location better so the reader can get a better picture of where you are. I feel kind of bad for Adam though, poor guy. But I'm only in Chapter 7 so maybe you'll give me a reason to dislike him later :-P Keep up the good work, I like it a lot.
First of all, great Introduction! Even though I'm not Christian, I liked the message. I've only read the introduction and first chapter and I can tell you the stories are great. From moving to America to become the Secretary of law from under Hubert and son was phenomenal. The way you describe the facial of Clair was astonishing. In my imagination, Clair looked like one of those TATU girls. Overall great start.