August 2nd, 2012 at 05:34am
Chapter 3: Curiosity
The corporation her boyfriend works for sounds scary. That description, sucking the soul out of almost everything it touched, made me smile. Good one!!
Oh yikes, is his cooking that bad? If I were her, I may be afraid to eat it.
The first few chapters were a little slow, but this was a turning point. I feel so badly for Adam, but if she doesn't want to marry him then she should stick by her initial answer. I can see now how marriage may not be something she wants, since her parents' marriage ended so badly.
Good update, if a little rushed. Still, good.
I am still not crazy about Clair but I can see where she's coming from, at least a little.
Things just got weirder, and while it's intriguing, I still find it a bit rushed. Again, that's just me. I am curious what the thing was, and why it's in her apartment...
The chase scene is pretty good, it captures the anticipation and fear. And the second creature, along with the first, sounds positively grotesque in appearance. Eek.
I'd be pissed too if some demons and Liam had destroyed my house... lol.