Rain of Tranquility - Comments

  • Contest Judge Comment:
    I really liked this. The characters worked really well together, and Gavin is such a sweetheart and clearly cares so much for Willow. You made the intercourse between them delicate and loving, and I really enjoyed that. Thank you for getting your entry in, and thanks for joining the contest =]
    June 11th, 2012 at 11:28pm