March 9th, 2015 at 09:06pm
I am a big fan of supernatural stories, (Witches, fae/fairies, and such) and I really like how you wrote this one. The first chapter reminded me a bit of the preface in Bewitching by Alex Flynn. The fact that her mother is almost obsessed with keeping Logan alive is both beautiful and disturbing. How is the disturbing part. But overall, the whole thing was an amazing read, I really liked the summary, as well. The description of the city, (It went very good with the layout, as well) is so in depth, it feels as though you are standing right there.
I don't have any complaints, if anything, I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Chapter one was incredible, great job!
I don't have any complaints, if anything, I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Chapter one was incredible, great job!