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  • Join the Masquerade

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    Awh, another treasure. This is wonderful. It mixes my love for Gee with my interest in heroin and it's grip on people.
    I'm really looking forward to where this is going :)

    Holy mother of God....

    What will I wear?

    ^. That made me giggle :)
    August 7th, 2012 at 01:42am
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    Mmm, Gerard and ice cream :3. *cue dirty thoguths*. Your writing never fails to amaze me, m'dear! Keep it up!!!! And, I'm glad I can be an inspiration to you! I can proudly say, I helped in getting this masterpiece out! Update soon!!!!

    xo Pika.
    July 19th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    Update soon please :)
    July 18th, 2012 at 09:20pm
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    This is wonderful :) Gee is so awkward its cute! I hope to see an update soon <3
    July 18th, 2012 at 06:41pm
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    I seriously think there's absolutely no room, or need for improvement. Your grammar/spelling is spectacular, which is a Godsend on this website. You're writing technique is unique, and amazing! You make us feel happy, and shy and giggly, at some points, and more serene and almost sad at others. You displayed the characters and their background stories at the right time at the right amount; instead of just throwing it all out at once, which gives us too much to take in; or giving us a tiny little bit or none, which doesn't hold us in, doesn't give the story backbone and doesn't give the story a foundation. And, without a foundation, the story would just crumble. So, yeah, you have talent beyond phenomenal. Your writing is exponentially better than 95% of writers on this website. And, I can truly see you becoming a world famous author (at that point, I'd be able to say "I helped her achieve that!"). And it's only the first few chapters! So keep it up, and update more often!

    xo Pika.
    July 18th, 2012 at 02:06pm
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    Awwwh, he was stammering, cuuuute X3
    June 13th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • nihilist.cryptid

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    You love writing this and I love reading this :) update soon. It's kind of melancholy but, it makes me smile.
    June 12th, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    I'm liking the whole feel of this, the writing style, and the sort of depressing aura. It's refreshing (not that that made ANY sense whatsoever!) but, update soon!
    June 12th, 2012 at 02:33pm