Every chapter of this story has been truly wonderful. Your writing style completely exudes intelligence, creativity, and realness. It's not often that I stumble upon a Tom Hiddleston fanfiction with this much thought, as many authors exaggerate his personality or turn him into one of his past roles. This has been so realistic and gratifying for me, as a huge fan of Tom's. Plus, your female character is very believable, and her struggles are relatable. I see situations like her's come up all the time with some college friends of mine. It's hard not to appreciate a fanfiction like yours, as you obviously worked diligently to make it exciting and tangible at once. It'll be interesting to see where things go from here. My only critique is that your word choice is occasionally confusing. It can be tough to understand some ideas you work to convey. I might suggest using more direct sentences once in a while. Otherwise, this story is fabulous. I'm a fan already, and will be patiently waiting for the next update!
August 27th, 2012 at 11:55pm
