Please Take Me Anywhere but Here - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    I like the way you ended it. It wasn't just a heated sex scene. There was real closure for Mary and her past.
    October 21st, 2015 at 04:43am
  • RamsayDearest

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    Gah I so don't want this story to end!
    October 19th, 2015 at 06:50am
  • shortygirl

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    He's not her dad?!? This all makes so much more sense now.
    October 16th, 2015 at 10:44pm
  • Amy3_

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    Omg, this story! I don't want it to end!
    October 16th, 2015 at 12:23am
  • katdeetz

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    I literally lost so much sleep over this and its prequel... not just because of the content though! I read the entire thing from 11pm last night to 12 am today. I went to sleep for like 4 hours. Haha. Not only is the storyline enticing, but your skill as a writer had me reading like I was consuming a fantastic book. I just couldn't stop! :P I cannot wait for the last bit, and to see how Mary's story comes to a close.
    September 30th, 2015 at 06:25pm
  • Zacky Baker.

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    I wonder what's going to be said when they cross examine him!!!
    September 28th, 2015 at 03:29am
  • MusicKillsThePain

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    @ shortygirl
    i'm cool with that :) I just waned to make sure you didn't post something about fanfiction on my wall or something because none of my friends know I write it haha. I'll message you the link!
    September 28th, 2015 at 02:46am
  • shortygirl

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    @ MusicKillsThePain
    I think everyone's fb is personal. I don't talk or post anything related to fanfiction my fb. Its kinda of awkward subject. If you don't feel comfortable having someone from mibba on your fb that's fine. I just figured we could talk.
    September 21st, 2015 at 05:26am
  • shortygirl

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    As much as it pains me to say this I think he's insane but that doesn't make what he did okay. He physically and emotionally scarred Mary for life.
    September 21st, 2015 at 05:22am
  • MusicKillsThePain

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    @ shortygirl
    Yeah I do! I mean it's more my personal one and I don't really post any band things on there for the most part, but I could send you the link to it if you still want me to. It's pretty boring though haha
    September 21st, 2015 at 04:44am
  • shortygirl

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    That was a huge step for Mary. Talking about what her dad did to her and then actually talking about sex. If you mind me asking do you have a facebook?
    September 14th, 2015 at 07:27am
  • stopitlilly

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    Alex Grieco and Dan Nickleski (sp?)
    September 5th, 2015 at 08:00pm
  • brvndnew

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    yeah I believe his roommate is Alex grieco!!
    September 5th, 2015 at 05:43am
  • brvndnew

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    yeah I believe his roommate is Alex grieco!!
    September 5th, 2015 at 05:42am
  • alltimemerrikat

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    I'm pretty sure his roommate is Alex Grieco?? He's put on instagram pictures of them both and said he was his room mate?
    September 5th, 2015 at 12:38am
  • shortygirl

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    love the update
    September 3rd, 2015 at 07:52am
  • shortygirl

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    I really think she could have gotten a doctor to remove the tracker but her way worked too I guess. I wouldn't have the guts to do it.
    August 28th, 2015 at 07:39pm
  • shortygirl

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    Why do you do this to me with the cliff hanger? I hope her dad is still behind bars.
    August 23rd, 2015 at 06:31am
  • shortygirl

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    For now?!?! Are you trying to play with our emotions? Lmao i love seeing Jack and Mary so happy together.
    August 21st, 2015 at 03:49am
  • shortygirl

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    I really hope her dad goes away forever so she can start to have a life of her own.
    August 21st, 2015 at 12:10am