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  • leecasper17

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    I just finished reading this and loved it. My cousin and I always called him Patty Cakes too. :) Great story, so much better than anything typical.
    October 9th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • AshleyVC88

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    I seriously read this is a matter of like 2.5 hours. And cried through half of it. LMAO. Amazing, as always!
    September 30th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • Aly!

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    This story was just amazing! I'm so sad that it's over though! I always looked forward to getting the email updates :)
    I loved the ending. It was perfect and made me so very happy.
    xoxo
    August 4th, 2012 at 10:40am
  • GotMalkins71

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    this was such a good story! i loved it but i'm sad that it's over :(
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:45am
  • Penguins11

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    Awesome ending! And there's nothing wrong with a sappy ending every once in a while! :) As much as I hate ridiculously sappy things if the ending to a story is sappy I'm a very happy person, and here it really fit because this story wasn't overly sappy, so you had a lot of wiggle room with your epilogue!

    Sad to see that this story is done, but you did a wonderful job!!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 05:03am
  • NMT82

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    Awesome story. Their letters to each other completely fit. Amazing writing.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 02:42am
  • Penguins11

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    Beautiful! Absolutely picture-perfect! I've loved this entire story from start to finish, and I love how you did this last chapter!

    And YAY! AN EPILOGUE!! Will we get to read about little Kane's running around? :D Can't wait! Love it!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 10:20pm
  • penschick8771

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    I absolutely positively 100 bazillion percent loved this story
    can't wait for the epilogue, but I'll for sure miss this story!
    you did an awesome job with it :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 07:34pm
  • missann10

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    Ah that was a cute ending, can't wait for the epilogue :)
    August 2nd, 2012 at 03:54pm
  • fashionlover25

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    Aw! I love the idea of writing letters before the ceremony! It was cute of
    Carly to sign her name as Mrs. Carly Kane. Amazing update!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 03:10pm
  • penschick8771

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    goodness that was the cutest thing i've ever read in my entire life
    That note had me crying like a baby
    Kaner is just too cute
    can't wait for the last chapter, it's going to be bittersweet for sure
    August 1st, 2012 at 06:26am
  • Penguins11

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    OH MY GOSH!

    You had me tearing up with that letter! It was so adorable, and the fact that Patrick would find something to give her that had more meaning than just a trinket for her wedding day was adorable - taking something important that also involves his family and incorporating something old into something new for the two of them, it was adorable!

    Have to love Jon in this chapter - he just makes me grin! You did an incredible job on this and I can't wait to see Patrick's point of view!!

    PS would you consider a one chapter epilogue so we can see a glimpse of married life? If not I totally get it, but I'm a sucker for the little 'happy ever after' that I can gush over haha!

    Amazing job and I can't wait for more!
    July 31st, 2012 at 06:03pm
  • missann10

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    That was such a cute chapter :)
    July 31st, 2012 at 03:41pm
  • bublbabie

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    Oh I can't wait for his POV of the wedding. I hope you post it soon.
    July 31st, 2012 at 06:49am
  • penschick8771

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    I just absolutely love everything about this story.
    no joke it's probably my favorite story that i've ever read
    cant wait for the next update :)
    July 30th, 2012 at 03:11pm
  • NMT82

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    Carly is very unselfish! Great update
    July 29th, 2012 at 09:40pm
  • lauren11

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    I love the story so much. Carly had her reasons, but I'm happy she decided to marry him. Maybe after your Stalberg story you can do Jon and Jessica, that would be an interesting one.
    July 29th, 2012 at 08:20pm
  • missann10

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    Love it and I understand where she is coming from when she turned him down. Update soon and can't wait for that Viktor story :)
    July 29th, 2012 at 04:36pm
  • bublbabie

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    I think that she was thinking of him when she said no. Which if you really love someone that is what you should be doing so I kind of agree with what she did. I mean she explained it to him right then and there so he knew what she was thinking. It's not like she just said no and left it at that.
    July 29th, 2012 at 01:21pm
  • Penguins11

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    So incredibly perfect! I absolutely loved it!
    July 28th, 2012 at 08:13am