Criticize - Comments

I don't follow wrestling, but you did well in letting the reader know what was going on. I hated Raven for what he did but then immediately liked him near the end.

Anywho, great entry and good luck in the contest!

I like it, I like it a lot! Her name (Raven) really suits her character and it's just... Really, really great. The grey lettering was a bit hard on my eyes, that could be changed but the content was really fantastic. I didn't know much about wrestling but I still got the gist of your story. Very well written, keep it up.

I haven't watched wrestling in a really long time, so I really had no idea who this was about.
That being said, I really liked it.
You made the story fit the song, and made the characters likable.

I really liked this line, it felt to her like TNA had become more of an asylum with the patients running loose rather than a wrestling company.

It's funny because I feel like that's what has really happened in the wrestling world.