Guilt - Comments

I... I don't even know what to say. This one shot was fantastic! The diary was incorporated perfectly into this, and I could feel the guilt Zacky felt, and I could feel his anger when he found out sbout Hather and Brian. Every emotion Zacky felt, I could feel, too.
This is a wonderfully written one shot. This just shows your talent as a writer. It was beautiful. :)

Dude, i still don't get how you do that. How does your brain come up with ideas like this and then puts them down so perfectly? ;_;
I'm sorry it took me a while to read this, but I kind of always forgot about it. I finally did though. O: And my own brain's like all on the floor right now.
This was fucking sad, but good...brilliant. But sad. :__:
I am angry at Brian.. <.< <.< Though, it's more Zacky I should be angry at? D: I dunno, so many emotions.... But this was insanely great!

Omg this was amazing. Good story. Damn your story always make me cry >.<

I've only cried once my whole life from reading something. That once was at the end of Where The Red Fern Grows by Wilson Rawlings, and that was only because I'm an animal lover and I was like eight.
But this... This story made me cry. Like big tears rollin' down my cheeks, bent over, sobbing.
It really touched me. Maybe because guilt eats away at me. I don't know.
But all I have to say is bra-fucking-vo. You are truly an amazing writer.

This was so sad. But so amazingly written. You're such a great writer! ;)

When I read this my eyes began to water, this was really good, I hope you turn it into a full length story it would be worth reading, good job

Shit, this is fucking amazing! I really, really like it! It's really sad though...REALLY sad. I can't believe that they would cheat on each other and STILL plan the wedding. And why was Zacky so torn up about her leaving if he was cheating on her anyway? He loved her and he CONTINUED to see that bitch Jessica? Dick. But I'm really sad that he jumped...both of them. They shouldn't have done that. It was really romantic that Zacky jumped after her, even if it was a really twisted thing to do. I probably would have done the same- I can't stand being guilty :(

I really liked this- one of my favorites that you've done. Keep writing!

Saleigh I hate y0u.

Write something happy for once.

God damn, I feel like I'm best friends with fucking Edgar Allen Poe.