Who Knew Then? (What We Know Now?) - Comments

  • chocolateshakegirl

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    Write a sequel! BUT it must be after I'll Be Right Beside You. So get to writing. Please and thank you :D
    August 15th, 2012 at 05:01pm
  • hockeygirl11

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please write a sequel Mr. Green
    August 15th, 2012 at 06:53am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Freaking aww! This was soo cute! I love the idea of the Carolina red dresses and ties, I'm sure that looked really sharp! Patrik was of course adorable! I love that Derek and Jared are getting along and that Derek found a nice girl. :-D Gotta love happy endings! Brody and Brett made me smile. :-)

    This was an amazing story. I really liked it (even if you did make me cry a rediculous amount!) I'm kind of sad to see this end but am really excited for the Cam and Jordan story... I think I need to go reread that. But anywho. This was a wonderful story. I love your writing. :-D <3 <3
    August 15th, 2012 at 06:51am
  • SoccerSkimHockey19

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    You did an amazing job with this whole story! I loved loved loved the ending! I can't wait for you to start up the other story!
    August 15th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • penschick8771

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    I seriously adored it :)
    you did an awesome job with this :)
    If you did a sequel to this, I would for sure read it :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:49am
  • hermione41

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    That was so sweet!!! I really enjoyed it, well done.
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:35am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :-) This was sooooo cute!! I'm so glad he asked her!!! I hope Patrik doesn't end up a carrot top! But I'm sure if he does, he will still be adorable!!!! :-D This was very sweet chapter! I have a feeling the next will be very bitter sweet. <3
    August 14th, 2012 at 05:23am
  • chocolateshakegirl

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    YAY!!!! I'm super happy she said yes and they got together and the baby is happy and I'm also really happy that this means Jordan and Cam can start their story again.

    I love how Eric basically said pull your head out of your ass and propose, and I absolutely loved reading this story! :D
    August 14th, 2012 at 05:02am
  • Colby_Armstrong9

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    Aw yeah Eric! You tell him what's up! Way to lay down the law dude, I am so proud.

    I loved Jared at the beginning. He was all nervous and stuff. And him trying to give himself a pep talk before trying to go out and propose. He is just adorable when he freaks out like that. My favorite part of this chapter was when he was trying to walk out of the bathroom and he was like, "I can do this." Then immediately turning back and saying, "I can't do this." Sometimes that can seem a little cliche but it seriously worked in favor for the character. He pulls it off well because it fits his personality, I could totally see him doing that in my head. I loved it!

    The end was sappy and I'm not a big fan of that, I don't know why. As soon as a couple gets sappy whether in real life or in fiction world, I have to resist the urge to roll my eyes. Sappiness is not a bad thing and they by all means are entitled to some sap time, I am just wired wrong. I'm not a girly-girl that would never shut up about her boyfriend. I tend to keep things private but that is just me. Hell, I'd probably be a sap if I dated/got engaged to a Staal so just forget this last paragraph ever happened. You rock and I love this story, sappiness and all!
    August 14th, 2012 at 04:14am
  • lovergirl5036

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    This is really cute. Hopefully Derek will get a happy ending, because he deserves one. Update soon!
    August 12th, 2012 at 06:14am
  • chocolateshakegirl

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    I can't stop smiling! They're so cute!!! Great name too! I sad it's coming to an end,but also happy because it means Jordan and Cam can get started again! :D
    August 11th, 2012 at 06:16pm
  • penschick8771

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    I absolutely loved this chapter :)
    I just love these two together :)
    I'll miss this story too when it's over
    August 10th, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • just.add.skates

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    I loved the chapter...I don't want the story to end
    August 10th, 2012 at 03:20pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    aww they are all adorable!!! only 2 left :( but yay for massy and jared!
    August 10th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love the name! I love how it is spelled. This chapter is soooooo cute!The Staals are wonderful. :-) <3 <3 Love it! Kinda sad bout only two chapters left.
    August 10th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • penschick8771

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    loved the update :)
    I'm glad the baby is here :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • chocolateshakegirl

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    Aww! It's the baby:) They're so cute :D
    August 8th, 2012 at 03:59am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!! The baby is here!! I'm soooooooo happy!! Yay!! Healthy baby boy!! AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! :-D Can't wait for name and details and such. :-D <3 <3
    August 8th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • Kare

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    Great chapter!!@
    August 8th, 2012 at 01:25am
  • Colby_Armstrong9

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    CAM!!! Sorry I screamed that when I read the author's note lol. Yay for home stretches! I'm glad you had fun writing this story because I had fun reading it. I also like the new and improved whipped Jared. Sooo mch better than mean Jared. I wonder what Derek talked to her about? I want to know how he's taking all of the news! Poor Derek, he's about to get dumped. That's depressing :( Looking forward to the end!
    August 4th, 2012 at 01:55am