Freaking aww! This was soo cute! I love the idea of the Carolina red dresses and ties, I'm sure that looked really sharp! Patrik was of course adorable! I love that Derek and Jared are getting along and that Derek found a nice girl. :-D Gotta love happy endings! Brody and Brett made me smile. :-)
This was an amazing story. I really liked it (even if you did make me cry a rediculous amount!) I'm kind of sad to see this end but am really excited for the Cam and Jordan story... I think I need to go reread that. But anywho. This was a wonderful story. I love your writing. :-D <3 <3
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! :-) This was sooooo cute!! I'm so glad he asked her!!! I hope Patrik doesn't end up a carrot top! But I'm sure if he does, he will still be adorable!!!! :-D This was very sweet chapter! I have a feeling the next will be very bitter sweet. <3
YAY!!!! I'm super happy she said yes and they got together and the baby is happy and I'm also really happy that this means Jordan and Cam can start their story again.
I love how Eric basically said pull your head out of your ass and propose, and I absolutely loved reading this story! :D
Aw yeah Eric! You tell him what's up! Way to lay down the law dude, I am so proud.
I loved Jared at the beginning. He was all nervous and stuff. And him trying to give himself a pep talk before trying to go out and propose. He is just adorable when he freaks out like that. My favorite part of this chapter was when he was trying to walk out of the bathroom and he was like, "I can do this." Then immediately turning back and saying, "I can't do this." Sometimes that can seem a little cliche but it seriously worked in favor for the character. He pulls it off well because it fits his personality, I could totally see him doing that in my head. I loved it!
The end was sappy and I'm not a big fan of that, I don't know why. As soon as a couple gets sappy whether in real life or in fiction world, I have to resist the urge to roll my eyes. Sappiness is not a bad thing and they by all means are entitled to some sap time, I am just wired wrong. I'm not a girly-girl that would never shut up about her boyfriend. I tend to keep things private but that is just me. Hell, I'd probably be a sap if I dated/got engaged to a Staal so just forget this last paragraph ever happened. You rock and I love this story, sappiness and all!
I can't stop smiling! They're so cute!!! Great name too! I sad it's coming to an end,but also happy because it means Jordan and Cam can get started again! :D
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! I love love love the name! I love how it is spelled. This chapter is soooooo cute!The Staals are wonderful. :-) <3 <3 Love it! Kinda sad bout only two chapters left.
YAY!!!!!!!!!! The baby is here!! I'm soooooooo happy!! Yay!! Healthy baby boy!! AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! :-D Can't wait for name and details and such. :-D <3 <3
CAM!!! Sorry I screamed that when I read the author's note lol. Yay for home stretches! I'm glad you had fun writing this story because I had fun reading it. I also like the new and improved whipped Jared. Sooo mch better than mean Jared. I wonder what Derek talked to her about? I want to know how he's taking all of the news! Poor Derek, he's about to get dumped. That's depressing :( Looking forward to the end!