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I come from the comment swap goodness. Hocky blech. I don't really care fr hockey lol but hey I like your story. THank you for posting it and putting it out there on comment swap :) Glad to try new things.

Here for the comment swap, but let me just say that I'm so glad I got to read this! I love hockey and horses and it's rare to see the two paired up so that is really cool. Harper is such a solid character. It's also really nice to see a Kyle Clifford story because I don't think I've seen one before. Keep up the good work. :)

I've never watched a hockey game in my life, nor do I know who this guy is but I really do like this story! I like the whole idea of him trying to seduce her and she's just like 'uh no!' lol!
I like the best friend Taylor, although he's kind of a douche sometimes you can tell he cares about Harper. I just hope Kyle doesn't go off with Savannah, anyone but her haha!
I shall be subscribing to this now. It's a really good story :) Update soon!

Omg, so even though comment swap is what brought me here, let me just say, I love Kyle Clifford. I had no idea this kind of fic would be on here! I love Harper and how she's not automatically into the exact same things as him. It's refreshing to find a new character every now and again. She's compassionate and very headstrong. I love her so much. You're really doing well at your grammar and spelling too. Again, refreshing. <3

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I really likes this story, even though I don't really like to watch hockey. I love how harpers innocence collides with kyles roughness and he's more of a player than Harper. Taylor and Lilly remind me a lot of me and my old friend. They act so much like we used to!
I didn't notice much or any grammar mistakes or spelling errors. I like the characters and the way that they act. I loved the plot and how detailed it was. It was a great story, keep updating! Thank comment swap for sharing this wonderful story with me.

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I'm honestly, not that big of a hockey fan but I enjoyed your story thus far.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and I like the casual writing style you have. Normally, excessive cursing isn't my thing but it fits well into the story and the characters. You have a very believable story here. Keep up the great work!

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I love hockey, so this story is that much better to me (:
I don't see any mistakes so far :D
Great job, keep it up ^-^

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so I know nothing about hockey what-so-ever, other than hit the ball with the stick and that's not exactly technical. I've only read the first chapter so far but will definitely be reading the rest when I have a bit more time. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes and it's written really well. Good job, your have a real talent for writing, keep it up.

I don't really know anything about hockey, but this is a great story. It's very well written, and I didn't see any spelling errors or tense changes, which is always a bonus, and the characters are really likeable. I'm glad comment swap brought me here.

Comment Swap did bring me here, but I still really enjoyed this!!!!! It's hard to find a story written by such an amazing writer as you. Though hockey really isn't my thing, the plot base of this is rather intriguing, and amazingly written. This is a very unique story; good job!!!!!!

So I'm going to be honest, Comment Swap is the main reason I'm here. I'm also not a huge fan of hockey and I've never really ventured too far out of my reading zone, but this was a great adventure. This story is good and I'm actually enjoying it. Great job! :D

Lol, I got this story about 4 months ago, like I said before I liked the plot, extremely well detailed, great description and emotion. I got through reading it but never came back t leave a 2nd review. I think you have a great gift for writing and should definitley continue it. Though hockey is really not my type of story, comment swap was nice enough to let me read a good story, so well done, keep up the great work!

Welp. Comment swap time. So, coming into this I didn't really know anything about Kyle. I'm not really one who's interested in hockey players, so, honestly, I didn't go into this with a high interest level. I'd also like to see a custom layout on here, because I just find the default very off-putting. But As for your writing, it's an easy read and keeps my attention well enough. You could add a bit more description maybe, but other than that, I liked it. Looks good to me. :)

So, comment swap is the reason why I began reading this story. I know nothing about the NHL or Kyle, but at this point I'm cursing myself for that.

Anyways, I truly like this story. It's cute how Harper seems innocent, while Kyle is more of a player. I enjoyed how Harper got drunk and had the sudden courage to talk to Kyle. The chapters so far are very interesting and held my attention.

Keep up the good work. :)

Hey, comment swap brought me here, and although I know nothing about Hockey or the 'real life' characters youve introduced I just read this as an original fiction piece and I like what you've written so far.
in terms of the writing itself I found it east to follow and I couldnt see any mistakes :)
However, personally ( and this is just me) I dont really like switching POVs but it seems to work here :)

im really enjoying this story, even though i really do not follow hockey in any way i am still really interested in this storyline in paricular. i love taylor for some reason! You are a great writer! please update soooooon! before i die? :P much love xx

I really like this story, it's something out of my comfort zone, but it's really good and I love the detail!

This is a great story! Extremely well detailed with the beginning and well written and very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning was really good! I just got through reading. Great job, keep it up!

Comment swap brought me here and I'll be honest, I know nothing about hockey or the people who play it. This didn't seem to be an issue as I was reading, though. You really have a clear sense of who your characters are, and I like that. I might suggest not switching the point of view within a chapter, though. It can get confusing. This is really well written and your spelling and grammar is near perfect, so good job with this, keep it up! =)