I come from the comment swap goodness. Hocky blech. I don't really care fr hockey lol but hey I like your story. THank you for posting it and putting it out there on comment swap :) Glad to try new things.
Here for the comment swap, but let me just say that I'm so glad I got to read this! I love hockey and horses and it's rare to see the two paired up so that is really cool. Harper is such a solid character. It's also really nice to see a Kyle Clifford story because I don't think I've seen one before. Keep up the good work. :)
I've never watched a hockey game in my life, nor do I know who this guy is but I really do like this story! I like the whole idea of him trying to seduce her and she's just like 'uh no!' lol! I like the best friend Taylor, although he's kind of a douche sometimes you can tell he cares about Harper. I just hope Kyle doesn't go off with Savannah, anyone but her haha! I shall be subscribing to this now. It's a really good story :) Update soon!
Omg, so even though comment swap is what brought me here, let me just say, I love Kyle Clifford. I had no idea this kind of fic would be on here! I love Harper and how she's not automatically into the exact same things as him. It's refreshing to find a new character every now and again. She's compassionate and very headstrong. I love her so much. You're really doing well at your grammar and spelling too. Again, refreshing. <3
Comment swap- I really likes this story, even though I don't really like to watch hockey. I love how harpers innocence collides with kyles roughness and he's more of a player than Harper. Taylor and Lilly remind me a lot of me and my old friend. They act so much like we used to! I didn't notice much or any grammar mistakes or spelling errors. I like the characters and the way that they act. I loved the plot and how detailed it was. It was a great story, keep updating! Thank comment swap for sharing this wonderful story with me.
Comment Swap. I'm honestly, not that big of a hockey fan but I enjoyed your story thus far. I didn't notice any spelling or grammar mistakes, and I like the casual writing style you have. Normally, excessive cursing isn't my thing but it fits well into the story and the characters. You have a very believable story here. Keep up the great work!
Comment Swap :) so I know nothing about hockey what-so-ever, other than hit the ball with the stick and that's not exactly technical. I've only read the first chapter so far but will definitely be reading the rest when I have a bit more time. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes and it's written really well. Good job, your have a real talent for writing, keep it up.
I don't really know anything about hockey, but this is a great story. It's very well written, and I didn't see any spelling errors or tense changes, which is always a bonus, and the characters are really likeable. I'm glad comment swap brought me here.
Comment Swap did bring me here, but I still really enjoyed this!!!!! It's hard to find a story written by such an amazing writer as you. Though hockey really isn't my thing, the plot base of this is rather intriguing, and amazingly written. This is a very unique story; good job!!!!!!
So I'm going to be honest, Comment Swap is the main reason I'm here. I'm also not a huge fan of hockey and I've never really ventured too far out of my reading zone, but this was a great adventure. This story is good and I'm actually enjoying it. Great job! :D
Lol, I got this story about 4 months ago, like I said before I liked the plot, extremely well detailed, great description and emotion. I got through reading it but never came back t leave a 2nd review. I think you have a great gift for writing and should definitley continue it. Though hockey is really not my type of story, comment swap was nice enough to let me read a good story, so well done, keep up the great work!
Welp. Comment swap time. So, coming into this I didn't really know anything about Kyle. I'm not really one who's interested in hockey players, so, honestly, I didn't go into this with a high interest level. I'd also like to see a custom layout on here, because I just find the default very off-putting. But As for your writing, it's an easy read and keeps my attention well enough. You could add a bit more description maybe, but other than that, I liked it. Looks good to me. :)
So, comment swap is the reason why I began reading this story. I know nothing about the NHL or Kyle, but at this point I'm cursing myself for that.
Anyways, I truly like this story. It's cute how Harper seems innocent, while Kyle is more of a player. I enjoyed how Harper got drunk and had the sudden courage to talk to Kyle. The chapters so far are very interesting and held my attention.
Hey, comment swap brought me here, and although I know nothing about Hockey or the 'real life' characters youve introduced I just read this as an original fiction piece and I like what you've written so far. in terms of the writing itself I found it east to follow and I couldnt see any mistakes :) However, personally ( and this is just me) I dont really like switching POVs but it seems to work here :)
im really enjoying this story, even though i really do not follow hockey in any way i am still really interested in this storyline in paricular. i love taylor for some reason! You are a great writer! please update soooooon! before i die? :P much love xx
This is a great story! Extremely well detailed with the beginning and well written and very descriptive. I started just reading but the beginning was really good! I just got through reading. Great job, keep it up!
Comment swap brought me here and I'll be honest, I know nothing about hockey or the people who play it. This didn't seem to be an issue as I was reading, though. You really have a clear sense of who your characters are, and I like that. I might suggest not switching the point of view within a chapter, though. It can get confusing. This is really well written and your spelling and grammar is near perfect, so good job with this, keep it up! =)