This is a really sad and touching story. I'd love to see more. The voice of the narrator sounds exactly how a young, yet not so young, girl should. It helps you connect with the character a lot. I like how it seems to slow down towards the end with less action and more thought. I also like the beginning a lot. "I knew" is a nice start to the story.
June 17th, 2012 at 08:43am