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The heart monitor gif was perfection. Everything about this piece was fantastic. Seriously, the layout, the not so happy ending, the regret. i just want to roll around in your writing and let it cover me up.

UM OK SO JUST CREEPING ON YOUR STORIES DONT MIND ME
but oh my god, I'm close to tears right now this was so wonderful dear lord oh my GOODNESS

Damn! Okay one, Forever in Love is such an adorable song. Oh JRich and your beautiful lyrics.

Two, this was so cute! I thought that I would be sad once I found out she was dying but you managed to make it an optimistic and sad ending. Like happy for the reader (and Cass) but sad for John. Poor John, I'll mend your heart for you. Anyways, I loved the length of each chapter. Like it was perfect for the story because we didn't really need much info anyway.

third, the fact that this story was hella realistic also makes it that much more awesome. Like it wasn't cheesy or fake, it was real!

Great job, Kantiz! :)