I didn't even finish reading, the spelling and grammar is horrendous. Thou, unless youre trying to reflect a shakespeare language, which even then is being used improperly, I think you mean though. There's also a huge difference in there, their, and they're. I'm sure this may be interesting, but I cant read it with the grammar. I look forward to retreading it though after its all fixed up, let me know when you edit it.