September 10th, 2014 at 07:30pm
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I can't say that I'm really a fan of slash, so I was a bit hesitant to read this. I'm glad I did. The prologue was really sweet. I like the way you've written the characters, especially the idea that they're from religious families and both live in a town where being gay is more or less not allowed. Very well written, easy to follow, and the layout is simple and doesn't distract the reader. I enjoyed this. Good luck with the rest of it! :)
My friend was really close to his family, you could tell that he was a little different but he was still cool. He tried dating girls, he even tried dating a girl, with the same name as him (different spelling). They dated for I don't remember how long. Everyone at school knew, he was gay. I think he knew it, but didn't want to say anything because his parents are the same sort people in your book.
He told his mom, she approved. Then he told his dad and well you can guess how that went (really really badly). He has a new little sister now, through his dad and as far as I know, his dad still doesn't approve or like him. His dad has called him every bad word in the book and so has his devil of a little brother has to. His stepmom likes him, asks him what he thinks and so he gets along with her just fine. Its just his dad and I think his stepdad (I'm not 100% sure on the stepdad) that don't care for him much.
He's a good guy, everyone likes him and cares about him. It's just disappointing of how his dad and others look at him, as if he's from Mars or something.