June 21st, 2012 at 09:41am
I have not seen the Avengers, but I am aware of them and the characters, and of course, Loki. Before I get to the chapter, I just want to mention that maybe you could clean up the summary area a bit, and have your notes in the author notes area. Anywho, the chapter was well-written, and explained everything, because I'm not very aware of the avengers, I'm glad to say that I did not feel lost at all. Interesting move on Loki for sedating Lacy. I'm actually curious about what will happen next.
Keep it up!
:)
I'm glad you went into the background of the actual agent, and how you told the story of the mind controlled character and how he treated them. We didn't really get to see that in the movie :]