Oh my goodness. I'm soooo glad Comment Swap sent me here. This is so different and unique. It's mysterious. I'm so in love with your main characters. I love how Naomi is totally into cars so I can relate and I just love the way you created these too and this story. Oof, I'm so excited for more.
Totally subscribing and recommending. oof. That's all I can say.
Fantastic, fantastic, fantastic. This is one of those stories where I got to the last chapter way too fast.
This is a different kind of story, like some other commenters said before me, but it's fresh and gritty and amazing. The world Gage and Naomi is well developed and mysterious, just like your lead characters. The way you write leaves the reader thirsty for more, because you've left room for your characters to grow and change, just like real people.
All in all this is story is subscribed to and recommended. I can't wait for more.
Your layout is beautiful and not too complicated which is always good. I've never really come across a story like yours... maybe because I never look. The plot is amazing and your characters are realistic, well at least to me they are :)