Fixed in the Shadows - Comments

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I never gave consideration to Avengers stories, I don't really know who they are individually so google helped, but a story I liked overall

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I'm a fan of the Avengers, but I've never considered writing a story about them. I think that the way you write characters seems to be in the same vein that they should be, and that is a very difficult skill. It is really impressive that you are able to do it in such a way. You are a great writer and I was very intrigued. Keep writing because I'd love to see where this goes.

(Comment Swap) First, I've never actually watched the Avengers before. Sue me, I'm sorry. But your summary instantly drew me in, as did the prologue which is important. Most writers can't grasp the story in the prologue but you did. I can't write actions scenes very well, but you did them amazingly and executed it perfectly. Kudos. 9/10 (It probably would be 10/10 but as I said, I've never seen The Avengers)

comment swap sent me here and the supernatural cross over was great. i've just started getting into supernatural and i think you really got the bothers personalities pretty accurate here haha. i like the idea of the mermaids and i also like how you made the story go into a completely different direction. it was interesting to read that chapter with a sub plot, but you wrapped it up nicely.

comment swap - I like your writing style very much, its easy to follow along and what not, the characters are very nicely de scripted as well and I like how you describe them, I'm not a big avengers fan but your writing kept me interested, and I liked the action scenes because its some what difficult to do but you managed to pull it off, keep it up!

I have to say, I do love the Avengers, however, saying that, i don't think I much appreciate fan fiction about them (maybe I'm just being picky). I do have to say, I think the characterisation of them is pretty good. I just don't like the way you write, the short sentences almost make it sound a bit...rushed? I've noticed you could probably connect some of the sentences using a comma than when you just finish it with a full stop. Otherwise it's pretty good.

I have to say, I do love the Avengers, however, saying that, i don't think I much appreciate fan fiction about them (maybe I'm just being picky). I do have to say, I think the characterisation of them is pretty good. I just don't like the way you write, the short sentences almost make it sound a bit...rushed? I've noticed you could probably connect some of the sentences using a comma than when you just finish it with a full stop. Otherwise it's pretty good.

FUCK YEAH AVENGERS!!!!! I'm so obsessed with Iron Man and Tony Stark and it just makes it all better with the fact that Robert Downey Jr plays him. *gushes* anywho... This is awesome. The way you wrote the Characters was great, not everyone is the greatest at writing a personality for characters that exist already. Everything was cleanly put together and it was just a sweet story. Your OC pulls you in right at the beginning which is awesome. The fact that you wrote an Avengers fanfiction and are pulling it off so well is just pure genius. Everything is smoothly transitioned in a way to where it works out really well, and well just keep writing! I’m interested to finish up this story, and I’ll def check out some of your other stories.

FUCK YEAH AVENGERS!!!!! I'm so obsessed with Iron Man and Tony Stark and it just makes it all better with the fact that Robert Downey Jr plays him. *gushes* anywho... This is awesome. The way you wrote the Characters was great, not everyone is the greatest at writing a personality for characters that exist already. Everything was cleanly put together and it was just a sweet story. Your OC pulls you in right at the beginning which is awesome. The fact that you wrote an Avengers fanfiction and are pulling it off so well is just pure genius. Everything is smoothly transitioned in a way to where it works out really well, and well just keep writing! I’m interested to finish up this story, and I’ll def check out some of your other stories.

Hi, here from comment swap. Not a part of the Avengers fandom, but I'm familiar with the characters. With that said, I like the way you characterized them. They're likable people and add to the story well. However, you could stand to be a bit more descriptive sometimes. At points I just skipped through what I was reading because I didn't really feel like I was in the story anymore. Other than that, keep up the great work! You've got a lot going for you.

*Le Comment Swap* firstly, I've never seen the Avengers :o (I don't really like comic book heroes I guess :/) But I actually really enjoyed this. It was fun trying to work out who's who cause I've never seen the Avengers and only know them by their hero names ._. ANYWAY I loved the action scenes, they can be difficult to write but you really pulled it off. I like Skylar, she's an interesting charecter :)

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Firstly, The Avengers! I absolutely love the avengers and the movie. I think i actually started jumping with joy when I read your summary!
that being said, this story was amazing! The grammar, especially. Since I am a bit of a grammar nazi I also loved your original character. Your chapters were the perfect length too. Neither too long and neither too short.
Also, Supernatural! It is definitely safe to say that you just made my day.

Comment swap sent me here! Hi, hello, how are you? Not really in the Avengers fandom, but I love how you characterized everyone and your writing style is really nice to read. Ummmm. What else to say in 200 characters? Your grammar is pretty good. And there are like little to no spelling errors that cannot be fixed with spell check, so yay for you!!! I'll check out the sequel, me thinks. Hopefully this is 200 characters because honestly, if not, I will copy and paste this and add more ramblings. But yes, KEEP WRITING AND STAY WONDERFUL.
I really hope that you DO keep writing this story and thaat perhaps you can make your way to a couple of my stories. I really DO need to actually watch The Avengers though and see what all the hullabaloo is about the shipping and stuff... but at the same time I don't just because I don't want to be sucked in to another fandom. But yes, loving the background, grammar skills and stuff of the sort.

Comment swap sent me here! Hi, hello, how are you? Not really in the Avengers fandom, but I love how you characterized everyone and your writing style is really nice to read. Ummmm. What else to say in 200 characters? Your grammar is pretty good. And there are like little to no spelling errors that cannot be fixed with spell check, so yay for you!!! I'll check out the sequel, me thinks. Hopefully this is 200 characters because honestly, if not, I will copy and paste this and add more ramblings. But yes, KEEP WRITING AND STAY WONDERFUL.

Comment swap sent me here. I never saw the movie Avengers, but after reading this, I kinda want to so I can understand everything :) but it was written very well. I really enjoyed it and I think I'm gonna check out the sequel.

I only have time to read the prologue at the moment, but I will definatly continue reading, as I am very interested. My only critique is that I feel that a little more background could be spared on your main character. How does she know about Asgard and the Tesseract? Has she worked with SHIELD before? Now, as I said, I haven't read much of it yet, and you might reveal that later, but I feel that just reading the first chapter, a little elaboration wouldn't hurt.

I really like your writing style though, it is fun and entertaining to read. Also, I am very curious, just for myself, was the man that she defended herself against just a random guy that is a part of SHIELD, or is he someone important? Again, you might say that later, but I was wondering, because it wasn't entirely clear.

Keep doing what you are doing :)

This is fantastic! I love the Avengers so i was excited to read this when I saw the picture :) I have trouble writing action scenes so I give you major props for writing such a well thought out plot! I recommended this story because I didn't stumble on grammatical errors and it's plain fantastic. Please, keep writing!

This is fantastic! I love the Avengers so i was excited to read this when I saw the picture :) I have trouble writing action scenes so I give you major props for writing such a well thought out plot! I recommended this story because I didn't stumble on grammatical errors and it's plain fantastic. Please, keep writing!

hey there, so i randomly read the last chapter of your story, very dramatic but here are a few ideas. it is difficult writing in the first person present especially because it is so easy to repeat onesself and to drop tense. I noticed you use phrases like just then and all of the sudden and the word "then" way to often, not only is it distracting but it is not the natural way someone uses the present tense when speaking. other than that all i will say is that allthough your ending of two lovers holding eachother in the rain as one dies is very dramatic it has been done before, alot, but who knows i guess that means people like it!

I love the Avengers and I am in love with Captain America so this was perfect, lol. With that said, I really enjoyed your story. The detail and overall emotion was spot on. I also loved your original character. Her spunky-ness and overall evolution throughout the story was awesome. I also enjoyed the length of the chapters, I don't know how many times I've been disappointed by stories due to the length of chapters or the story itself; but thankfully that wasn't a problem here. I also loved that you crossed Supernatural in there. It's been one of my favorite shows since it started, so I was abnormally excited that you incorporated them in there. You can never have enough Sam and Dean! xD Anyway, I enjoyed this story enough to finish it in one sitting. I am starting on the sequel now. :)