June 27th, 2012 at 01:24pm
This story is great. I only had intentions of reading the prologue and a little bit of the first chapter, but I was so wrapped up in the story that I didn't realize I read the whole thing and was complaining that there was no more to read!
I was so into the story that I heard a crunch outside my window and jumped up thinking it was a zombie! haha.
This is really great. It flows quite well and the dialogue is easily believable. The only thing I have to say is, it reminds me a bit of every other zombie movie. So I would say to try and stray away from any of the cliches. You're doing a great job at making it your own.
I'm excited to see where this is going.
Happy writing!
(Chapter1) sounds too much like the latestof sombie movies? just under a new name.
Startsoput, depicing the common influenza, as i was expressed. ok, all very good this far.
ticking off different people, to catch it, later to lok out for, ok.
continuing to resite various cenes, caused by the same influenza, or?
the research, oming up with zero, or making it worse, was it? how'd that come out, into the public? do they have no sense of security? (I just had to ask)
After this, it's back to the flesh eating 'Zombies'.
Anyone coming up with a real name, sise 'Zombie' is well defined, and has nothing to do with, what's said in here, or the films. (for thuse who know what it is)
Starts out catchy, but the topic, and the scenario? too much of catching the latest trend. at least, for me it is.