You Met Me At an Interesting Time - Comments

  • Give me Therapy...

    Give me Therapy... (100)

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    I love it so far, I'm excited to see what happens between Gabriel and Audrey, so please update whenever you can. c:
    July 15th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • katreena

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    I hope yo update soon , I can't wait to see what happens next .
    And you have a new subscriber :D !
    July 15th, 2012 at 04:47am
  • xXLostXSoulXLoverXx

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    Aw :'( Hopefully Damien can help her get over her pain. Can't wait for more :)
    July 13th, 2012 at 09:24pm
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    Comment Swap and whatnot.
    Your layout is too wide, so you have to make the comment section a bit narrower, because the ends of the words can't be seen.
    You have a lot of little mistakes, e.g. in Chp 1 where some of the tenses are wrong, and some of the quotation marks are backwards. And the second to last paragraph is too long so you could probably shorten it so several paragraphs.
    Also, your summary's is kind-of confusing, and I think you might be giving a little too much about the plot away.
    June 29th, 2012 at 03:24am