Silenced - Comments

Oh wow…I am really speechless, this story really grabs the reader from the beginning, from the conflict with the parents to the little girl that had to endear that! To her growing up and having to go through that sort of torment. It was sad but powerful, but an amazing chapter! Really great writing, keep up the amazing work!

this story has great potential. I enjoyed the little girl's point of view as to what was happening to her mum.

Can I recommend that you get someone to look through your story before you post. A few little spelling errors (nothing major that disturbs the flow of the story) that could be corrected.

I look forward to reading more!

I don’t usually have the heart to read stories like these, as I find them extremely painful and too real to read. It’s terrible that she had to witness he father kill and bury her mother, and the fact that her father goes so far as to sexually assault her. This story has great potential, but due to the content and the emotions and the details and everything, I couldn’t continue on reading. Great job, nonetheless.

I always hate stories like this. Not hate as in "oh, this story is so horrible", but in a way that you never really like to think that this kind of thing happens, but it does :\ It's written great though!

This is very sad :/ It's terrible in itself that she is treated so poorly and having to witness something as tramatic as that would be enough to make any person become clinically insane. I find it hugely interesting her best friend is deaf and would love to know where it goes from here.

The beginning was very haunting and very thrilling at the same time. I really enjoyed that. I could see a little girl hiding up in her room as her father does all the things to her mother, and I normally can't get that kind of visual with stories like these, so well done! I think this story has so much potential, and I can't wait to see where you take it. Keep writing!