Sweet Temptations - Comments

didn't even leave a comment. im re-reading cuz it's SO good. like. even fernando agrees!

sequel?

sequel?

i just read the whole story! when are we getting a sequel?

thanks for the mention... I actually cried as i realised my little feeling was right. can't wait to read the sequel x

OMG NOOOO!!! Fernando you idiot... he had Ava back and he's gone and done this. I have an odd feeling I know what will happen in the next chapter to led onto the sequel... can't help but hope that I'm wrong x

Loved the chapter... I'm glad that Fernando didn't just let her go. Can't wait for your next chapter so please update soon x

I absolutely loved this chapter, it made me cry multiple times!

I legit like started bawling during that 'break-up' scene!!! Can't wait until the next update!!

Loved this chapter... poor fernando. what a bitch Olalla is, tho i'm confused why she hasn't been arrested since William said that she was involved in the kidnapping x

Would love to see a sequel to this... I hope Ava will be okay and I can't wait for Olalla's involvement to be revealed x

I would love if you made a sequel!!! I get so excited every time I see that you updated(:

Haha I knew that it was William... Olalla is such a bitch, how could she do that to Ava. I dread to think what Fernando will do when he discover what his wife has done. I hope Ava will be okay... update soon please x

OMG Ava how could you be so stupid... I hope Fernando will be able to save her before it's to late x

OMG Latoya has been kidnapped... can't wait to see what you have planned next x

Glad to finally be able to put a face Ava. That William is nothing but trouble and the sooner Fernando learns the truth the better x

Loved the latest chapter and the pictures of Ava's parents. I can't remember but have you said who Ava looks like? Anyway can't wait to read more... the mystery is getting good xx

I Think Ava should find herself a good boyfriend who is seemingly perfect, but turns out to be the caller. Then Fernando will get jealous (which is insanely hot:) and h will warn her that her new beau isn't what he appears to be. Thus making Fernando and Ava have a massive fallout , leaving Fernando with my shoulder to cry on;) lol. Jk

I have a funny feeling that the mystery caller is Olalla's fancy man... Latoya should defo take this more seriously especially after all her and Ava have been through. Can't wait to read more, so please update soon x

Ahhh Ava's sick... lucky she's got Fernando to look after her xx