Puppy Love - Comments

ok so i love this cuz i love damian. haha....tho i gotta say its different reading a story about him where hes not involved in either Celtic Thunder or GLEE. but i love this anyway! u got damos personality to a t. i actually met him and he is wicked sweet and nice and ya, u had better UPDATE this SOON!!!!

I have no idea who Damian is in reality. Google will help me with that. I love that I don't know who he is though because then whatever you put his personality in the story as doesn't conflict with what I have seen. You're writing style is so simple and lovely making the story very sweet ans bubbly which I like. I do think the first chapter was a little rushed but the second one is much better. This plot as a lot of potential. Good luck with it. :)

Although I'm not sure who Damian is in the real world, I do think you've provided enough details that I can actually read this. I love the character you made Dakota out to be and I also love your style of writing. great story!

Okay, so I like your writing, it's really clear and there are very little mistakes but I must agree your first chapter is rushed. I highly doubt she's agree to go out with a students brother straight away, conflict of interest and all. That being said it seems like a good story and good luck with it! :D

So i really have no idea who this Damian guy is (sorry). i like the character of Dakota and I think your story line has potential but personally i think that your first chapter was...im not sure maybe rushed i think your second chapter is much better. good luck with this :)

Oh my God. This is so cute! I love it. And oh wow. Damian. The accent and the hair and the face and all of that. Ugh, I can't even. Anyway, this is very well written and it's so original and totally cute. I really, really want to know where it's going to go from here! I'm definitely going to subscribe. Can't wait for an update! :)

I love the concept of this story. I love Damian, but I've never read a fanfic about him. I have about Cameron though. In my opinion this chapter seemed a little rushed, but it's no big deal. I love the layout too. I'm going to subscribe this story. I can't wait for more!!! :)

This is looking good so far. It's moving very fast, and it's interesting. Your layout is fantastic and I hope to see this go for a very long way. Your banner is also incredible - simple yet engaging. That really is a fantastic photo. I hope to see more of this and I am definitely reccomending.

I really love the layout! I watched the Glee Project and Damian was my favorite. The first chapter is very well-written and it's a perfect start to the story! There were very few errors and you've done a great job. I really can't wait to see where you take it.

I really love the layout! I watched the Glee Project and Damian was my favorite. The first chapter is very well-written and it's a perfect start to the story! There were very few errors and you've done a great job. I really can't wait to see where you take it.

I love the layout, it’s so simple and easy to read. This story is beautifully written, with detail and description scattered throughout the story. The story flows very well, the chapters are a bit shorter than my personal preference but that’s fine. I barely saw any errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling. It’s a great story overall! Keep writing!

I like how this opens. Their relationship seems to move very very fast, so maybe slow it down a bit? They just met. Also, some of the sentences are in pasted tense, and some are in present tense. maybe try to stay consistent. But the descriptions are really good, and i really like the plot of this so far! Keep writing.