I'm Sorry I'm Bad - Comments

  • JustThinking

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    this is just getting embarringsing for Paul. He can't remember her at all... damn boy.. not cool.. I wonder if he ever finds out at this point.. he really needs a slap or two... or until it jocks his memory... hmmm.. oh and good to know, I was wondering what was going on with crushed. good chapter Smile
    June 28th, 2012 at 11:46pm
  • waves of strange.

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    I really like this chapter:) For some reason, I like that Paul doesn't remember her.
    June 28th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • waves of strange.

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    Love it, please updaye soon!
    June 27th, 2012 at 06:42pm
  • Synyster Gates;

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    Love it!
    June 27th, 2012 at 03:51pm
  • JustThinking

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    I was right about the fact that he had forgotten all about her... I wonder if he will receive a reality check by Jared or remain unknowing and stupid for a while longer. When is he going to know that the person who is bothering "his angel" is himself and that his chances of being with her are pretty slim. I'm looking forward to seeing the verbal slap from his pov. Good chapter. :D
    June 27th, 2012 at 01:24pm
  • XxguttabitchxX

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    I think this is very readable and i understand it with no problem . It is a very good story and i cant wait to read more :) .
    June 27th, 2012 at 02:23am
  • Bluecaty15

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    i like this so far, it gives us a glimpse of whats going on in Paul's head through the whole thing! i honestly can't wait until the part where he lays his eyes on Maria for the first time since shifting, the moment his eyes meet her everything changes!! AAWW!! Please update again soon!
    June 27th, 2012 at 12:48am
  • Mew Aqua

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    its pretty good so far.
    the harem dream is... egotistical, which i can see Paul as.
    update more please!
    June 27th, 2012 at 12:30am
  • XxguttabitchxX

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    Thanks for letting us know how pauls POV is :)
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:55pm
  • JustThinking

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    Probs to you for actually making it sound like what I guy could think... I think... It's not all sweet innocent and all that. So a good first chapter and I'm looking forward to seeing more of what goes on in that min of his.
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • bublbabie

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    interesting so far. keep it up with the great updates
    June 26th, 2012 at 10:19pm