July 6th, 2012 at 03:56pm
I just discovered this story and I slapped myself because how is it possible this little gem has escaped my eyes until today!
I love how mysterious Frank is, I don't even know what he is but he has such a double personality and ah, I love it!
Oh Gerard, he's so...ah, I can't even describe it but he's something <3
I love this story, it's one of my favorites as of now; update soon, can't wait to read more!
xo
This is a good start, your writing flow is great, easy to follow and read. The first few chapters are short but I like that, keeps me interested.
Unfortunately I'm not up to date with any of the My Chemical Romance band members. None the less I did enjoy it.
As I read I didn't come across any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors.
Very nice keep writing :D