This World is Mad - Comments

I really like it hope you update more

Wow, this was incredibly well written. I'm usually not a fan of vampire stories because they all like to take on this. . .weird thing that's just not vampirey at all after Stephanie "Sparkle" Meyers put her spin on vampires and girled them up, I've seen too many people making pansies out of vampires. I'm thrilled that you've made your vampires creepy and dark. Very suspenseful. I did feel sorry for him though in the first chapter when he realized he wasn't given a real proper burial. That would suck.

Just a little fyi in case an extremely picky story mod comes along, your title is capitalized incorrectly. Should be This World is Mad. :)

I really like the mystery that you guys put into this. It's truly original and unlike any story I've ever read before. And I especially love that you haven't given them names yet. I feel like it somehow adds to the suspense. Anyway, consider me subscribed, and update soon please.(:

Well, I never read a story like this and this story is interesting. I like your use of words and how its a little mysterious. I'm most definitely going to subscribe and looking forward to reading more of this story.

I don't know quite what I want to say about this story. I like it, but at the same time I'm kind of iffy. I do like the background - I think it's quite pretty. And I like the sepia tone to the words. It makes it much easier to read. I feel like you may have some grammar issues and run on sentences, but other than that, it's pretty alright. The one thing that bothers me is that I don't know the names of the characters. I was confused at the first part of the second chapter, thinking it was the same character as the first chapter. So maybe you can rename the chapters with the names added in the descriptions or something instead? Other than that, fantastic story.

I'm gonna start out by saying that I'm glad comment swap brought me here. This story is extremely well written. I love the eccentric style of writing that you used. Your adjectives are wonderful and well chosen. The layout is amazing. Did you do that? If you did, great job! If not, then...well, great job on the story! -A

I'm going to start by saying that I really enjoy your layout. I really enjoy this so far. The grammar and spelling is good and I like that you started with a background of the main character. I really like your word choice and your style of writing. Keep up the good work, and I'll make sure I keep reading.