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  • daughter

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    FINALLY, I FINISHED IT. Ugh, so long but so good! I loved it. You wrote their personalities SO perfect and I'm SO jealous that you have that ability. I adored Thor's dialogue and Tony's wit. That was one of the most enjoyable parts of the story for me.

    Honestly, I'm pretty disgruntled with the ending, but you promised a sequel so I may be able to forgive. :D I can't wait for it to be posted!
    September 3rd, 2012 at 04:22am
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    DJ wiggles her eyebrows experimentally, feeling her skin pinch under the heavy adhesive. “What are these, then? Twenty words or less. You tend to ramble and I tune you out.”

    “Consider your brain a computer,” he explains a little smugly. “And this has the capability to restore it to factory settings. Or to revert it to an older version of its self. Consider it augmentation aided by a form of time travel.”

    She pauses, staring blankly over at him. “That was definitely thirty-seven words. All these brilliant inventions and you can’t even do simple math.”

    ^That was also perfect. And everything out of Tony's mouth was just so suited to him. And this story was brilliant, and I can't WAIT for the sequel. And mini-series? Uh, yes please!
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:37pm
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    Haha. Damn, AND you referenced Mean Girls. You're now officially on my list of favorite people.
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:42am
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    “Is this real?” The way her nose crinkles doesn’t do anything to calm the flutter in Steve’s gut. “Or has Natasha’s devil vodka put me in a coma where I have amazing dreams?”

    “That’s a yes!” Clint informs him from some hidden alcove far off. Neither had noticed him leave.

    DJ looks like she’s trying really hard to process her surroundings. “Wow… My subconscious sounds like Clint.”

    ^^brilliant. i love this whole thing right now.
    August 25th, 2012 at 06:54am
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    Prepare for commentary onslaught full of my favorite quotes, starting with: "...he starts modifying something which- to Pepper- looks unsettlingly like a cross between a torture device and an angry alien tree"
    August 25th, 2012 at 06:47am
  • Lo_east

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    Ah love!!!!!!!!! Sequel up soon please!!
    August 23rd, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • ShuperGurl143

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    Wow loved it. SEQUEL up soon I hope. Mr. Green
    August 20th, 2012 at 10:37pm
  • Morning Air

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    BUT I LOVE YOU. And this story of course, so I hope the sequel is up soon.

    Meanwhile, mini-series: YES, PLEASE. :'D
    August 19th, 2012 at 11:03pm
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    BUT I LOVE YOU. And this story of course, so I hope the sequel is up soon.

    Meanwhile, mini-series: YES, PLEASE. :'D
    August 19th, 2012 at 11:03pm
  • Lo_east

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    Colder than 70 years on ice. You're such a great author this is THE best avengers story out there.
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:15pm
  • kristinvengeance

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    omfgomfgomfgomfgomfgomfg more O.O
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:45pm
  • Arcapello

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    Update soon, please? :D
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • afriendalabooboolala

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    i love the avengers... i don't really favour captain america, yet, still love this story.
    August 15th, 2012 at 04:04am
  • unmask your desire

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    I really love this story, just read it and it was awesome. Please update soon :)
    August 14th, 2012 at 03:19am
  • Lo_east

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    Don't kill DJ please?
    August 13th, 2012 at 04:14pm
  • Arcapello

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    I loved the Mean Girls reference, lol. And yay :D Update and a sequel :DDDDDDD
    August 13th, 2012 at 02:58am
  • heygracerun

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    I need more! It's greatness.
    August 12th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • kristinvengeance

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    steve's going to be taking his shield up his own ass real soon....moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O
    August 11th, 2012 at 02:11am
  • Lo_east

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    Dead inside. Omg. Dead
    August 10th, 2012 at 10:43pm
  • Arcapello

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    Yay :D This chapter was really good, but seriously, now I need another!!
    August 10th, 2012 at 04:33pm
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