I really like this story :O how they are twins but are opposites and I love the way you describe the characters. Enough to get a general idea but not enough to where our imaginations cant make the image of the characters our own. I'm not a punctuation nazi so I didn't pay attention to that and I think your story is quite easy to read. I like the amount of words you use but you aren't too verbose. I really like this story actually, keep writing it :3
August 5th, 2012 at 03:00am