First off, I just wanna say I appreciate the layout design. It's very fitting and really helps your piece. Sometimes you use a few too many descriptive words that disrupt the flow of things but I do admire your way of describing a scene. Also that's primarily just for the first chapter as you seem to do away with this by the second, so congrats! That last sentence of the first chapter is just adorable as well. It's a great start I must say.
December 27th, 2016 at 10:11am