Tomorrow Never Comes - Comments

Thanks and it's not completely finished I'm just having trouble with how exactly I want it to sound and what not. And it is a tragedy. Won't tell you what happens exactly so I don't ruin it but yes I am going to finish when I figure out everything.

I have stumbled upon your story on comment swap. It says that it's completed is that true? I think it has a lot of potential and I am curious to know what happened betweened the two main characters. Was it an affair or a tragedy? Her love for Sam seems so passionate. The background is kind of meh, but I'm sure you are going to switch it up. 8) I like the background information you give the reader. It's a nice introduction of the characters and what we are in store for. That's what made me interested. Your summary was just enough to draw me in. I really hope you write more to this and don’t just abandon it.