Apparition - Comments, page 2

Shattered_Mirror (100)

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@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Thanks! If you can, please recommend it and share it with others! It means a lot to me that people like what I write :)

May 25th, 2013 at 12:04am

Lady.V. (960)

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I only just found this and I am in love.

May 24th, 2013 at 07:38pm

Allicat (100)

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I love this story, of course I'm sticking around!! Can't wait for the next chapter

May 24th, 2013 at 02:21pm

Sims3_109 (100)

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I wonder if Harvey's true colors will come out when the go abroad :) Can't wait for the next chapter :)

March 27th, 2013 at 09:31am

sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb (100)

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so excited to see where harvey's taking her!

March 27th, 2013 at 02:33am

fan_girl (100)

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Can't wait to see where they're going, the next part of the story sounds amazing :) Update soon! <3

March 26th, 2013 at 02:23pm

sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb (100)

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loved it, as usual. can't wait for more!

February 24th, 2013 at 11:08pm

fan_girl (100)

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Loving it :D WANT MORE RIGHT NOW!! <3

February 17th, 2013 at 05:16pm

DeborahAshleigh (100)

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I love how Harvey has two sides, one that is caring and another that screams dangerous. LOVED the chapter and can't wait for more!

February 12th, 2013 at 01:18pm

sdgfvbjkhkjnkjbjhhb (100)

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i honestly have absolutely NO complaints about the story, so beautifully written and creative. you're doing an excellent job with this and i can't wait for the next update.

January 8th, 2013 at 09:44pm

psychotic secrets; (1400)

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I really like this story. I love the editing, not a single mistake in any of it.

The only thing is I don't like the fact that she is 16. It's almost too unrealistic, even thought this is a demon story.

Aside from that I really like this story very much.

January 8th, 2013 at 12:19am

fan_girl (100)

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Great new chapter :D I don't mind the wait if it's THIS good!

January 7th, 2013 at 05:51pm

DeborahAshleigh (100)

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Aw they are mates (:
I love how its supposed to be possessive and loving at the same time when he tells her that she's basically his. Adds a double meaning to it and I can't wait to see what happens next!

January 7th, 2013 at 11:55am

Sims3_109 (100)

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very nice chapter update :)

December 18th, 2012 at 07:13am

Lady of the Moon (100)

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I'm very engrossed with this plot. I've always been fascinated with paranormal/demon stories, even though they've sort of fallen out of the norm. It was actually nice to see this story in the story feed this afternoon when I stumbled upon it, and I have to say that I'm very glad I checked it out.

I'm curious to see how you'll further develop this story, and I hope you'll be able to update soon.

~Lady

December 18th, 2012 at 12:24am