A Fallen God Returning to it's Divine Form - Comments

Though the writing itself is interesting, it was still a little confusing. And by that I mean it was a very confusing. If it weren't for the title, I would've been totally lost. But the actual writing was pretty good, you just need to do some proofreading and fix some spelling errors. Keep writing!!!

This isn't usually what I would read, and it's pretty confusing. There are some grammar errors, but it's understandable what you meant to say. As for content, you should try adding a few more details maybe, because it does get a little confusing and details help explain everything a bit better. Like, what the boy was feeling when he held the razor to his wrist, or explain more of the other boy's intentions. Hopefully I helped a bit (:

You type im when it's actually I'm and it's when it is its (the genitive).
As for the plot, I have to confess I have to force myself into reading the whole thing. The way you write is confusing and damn, people who cut is an off topic for me, sorry.
I encourage you to coninue writing and also reading to improve your writing style. And keep writing about the things you love, not everyone's going to like the same genre!

It sounds interesting, but I was confused during the thing. The description is lacking in the story and needs some work. The way it started off was confusing as well. The style and the way it is written is really good and amazing. But really work on describing the story better. I hope this helps you become a better writer.