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  • ariesgirl

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    I guess both of the twins are following in daddy's footsteps.
    August 22nd, 2012 at 07:30am
  • ll-Fantasia-ll

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    Such a good ending...kinda wish there was a sequel :] xD anywho, good job, interesting story
    August 20th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • ariesgirl

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    They know how psychotic Damian is why would they take his son? I guess love makes you do sensless things.
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:51am
  • Jesse711

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    Well that's the end of her bitchyness lol a little grusome for me though
    August 13th, 2012 at 08:52pm
  • Jesse711

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    Yay an update!!! NOO a cliffhanger :/
    August 13th, 2012 at 05:34pm
  • Infinity and Beyond;

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    HAHA, HE HAS HIS BEAUTY MARK BY THIS AREA! I really don't know what's funny.
    August 8th, 2012 at 08:43am
  • Jesse711

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    Please don't make me wait another day for the next chapter !!
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:20am
  • Jesse711

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    Oh my that sucks poor babies :/
    August 4th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • Jesse711

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    Finally they're born !!
    July 31st, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • Jesse711

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    i was going crazy for the next part lol
    July 30th, 2012 at 11:08pm
  • Jesse711

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    Awwwww, more ?!
    July 30th, 2012 at 03:42pm
  • lil' dynamite

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    Sooo I've been reading this story, and first off I'd like to say that it's a really great plot line. Someone mentioned once that the plot wasn't at all realistic, but it is. I personally did fall in love with the guy who raped me(although he's a MUCH different personality than Damian and MUCH less extreme), so it's definitely not impossible.

    Just a little bit of constructive critism, and I hope I'm not sounding too bitchy. The slang and dialogue in the story is kind of a lot. I think if there was more description, it would help make an already awesome story a lot stronger. A little more image in our little noggins, rather than this much personality :p
    That's all I have to say really Mr. Green
    July 29th, 2012 at 08:32am
  • Jesse711

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    Yay they're coming !!
    July 25th, 2012 at 09:43pm
  • Z Loan

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    Omg cant waiitt XDDD for the next chapter xD
    July 25th, 2012 at 07:24pm
  • Jesse711

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    More, pleeeeeease ?!?!
    July 24th, 2012 at 07:12pm
  • ryan.berch

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    Omg i love this its sooooo good well sad a points but good
    July 23rd, 2012 at 08:02pm
  • ryan.berch

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    Omg i love this its sooooo good well sad a points but good
    July 23rd, 2012 at 08:02pm
  • Z Loan

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    Great Chapter,I am kinda worried for Kayla's kdis
    July 22nd, 2012 at 07:55pm
  • Z Loan

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    Awsome story,cant wait for more ^^
    July 21st, 2012 at 04:04pm
  • l2DXtremel

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    I liked this chapter. I liked that Kayla and her mom are finally on the same page. Update soon!
    July 21st, 2012 at 09:24am
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