A Scandal in Hollywood - Comments

  • warmaiden

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    this story is so beautiful, i just can't.

    the raw emotion flickering off just the first chapter is wonderful and the way you've made up this main character is breathtaking. the layout itself is very simple and i really like that. it's a wonderful touch to something like this. this does seem to be a rather fast-paced story, seeing to the mix of events, but overall this is fantastic and wondrous.
    September 28th, 2013 at 09:12am
  • Smokestoburn

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    COMMENT SWAP SPIT, TONGUE, LIPS, AND OTHER PARTS OF YOUR BODY. ANYWAY,THIS IS REALL GOOD! It's midnight here and I didn't quite finish the whole chapters yet, just 3-4 chapters but i promise, I'll do it very soon. I'm a sucker for original story or ideas and this happens to be two in one, so BROWNIE POINT TO YOU!!! I like the simple layout, it's not hard to read and the background sends some calmness and somehow peaceful into the story. Love Erika and Laura friendship so much, I ship them both. Hahaha, anyway, this is a very good update. You just got yourself a subscriber and a comment from me. (: update soon!
    September 14th, 2012 at 06:50pm
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    I love this story so far, it is slightly fast-paced but I’m still hooked on it. I like the back and forth between point of views of the different characters, it really shows the different lives and shows the secrets behind celebrity-hood and such. I can’t wait for more (:
    September 3rd, 2012 at 05:09am
  • dawn of light

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    That chapter was amazing! Brilliant! I was over my seat the whole time ^.^
    August 1st, 2012 at 05:14am
  • dawn of light

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    She's utterly brillant! The way she held up a conversation with his dad was interesting. I can't wait until more unfolds :D
    July 16th, 2012 at 08:04pm
  • dawn of light

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    HoLY CHIZ. UPDATE SOON, IM DYING HERE.

    And why did he ask her so quickly :O love maybe? ..
    July 14th, 2012 at 07:11am
  • dawn of light

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    She moved in with him!

    And his dad was so nice to lend Brett the money.

    AHHH update soon yeah? :D
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    I'm curious as to just how Neil and Laura are going to tie together. It can't just be about his son, they're going to meet eventually right?

    The only issue I have with this is that Laura and Berry's relationship seems a bit rushed. Like, one date and he wants her to move to California? That seems a bit much. The speed of their relationship actually makes me a bit wary of the story, despite enjoying Neils character.
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • LettersToNormandy

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    I'm curious as to just how Neil and Laura are going to tie together. It can't just be about his son, they're going to meet eventually right?

    The only issue I have with this is that Laura and Berry's relationship seems a bit rushed. Like, one date and he wants her to move to California? That seems a bit much. The speed of their relationship actually makes me a bit wary of the story, despite enjoying Neils character.
    July 6th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • kristenmichelle

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    Not going to lie, I actually was not excited comment swap brought me here at first, just because I do not normally like these types of stories. But, this was very good and exceeded my expectations. The beginning got me interested and I liked it more as I read on. Nice layout too! Nice job! Keep up the good work!

    Kristen :)
    July 6th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • s c o r p i o n ;;

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    This is very nice, at first I wasn't sure because I'm not really into this kind of idea, but it has some potential :) I like the detail and I love funeral scenes, sorry I'm weird, but that aside keep it up :3
    July 6th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • dawn of light

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    Erika is so adorable here. Haha Thats what friends are there for :)

    DAMMMN, she found out about Brett now. WOOOo DRAMMMA ;D

    Cant wait for more ^.^
    July 6th, 2012 at 01:09am
  • discoveringclouds

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    I really like the update! And I agree with dawn of light, the first comment, your summary really made me curious yesterday and the flow of your story is realistic and natural.
    With the mention of mac and cheese...I really want pasta. ;)
    July 5th, 2012 at 09:50pm
  • dawn of light

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    The short summary made me click on the story without having a second thought. It got me curious. And the layout is cute!

    The way you write is so natural. You describe it perfectly. It's not too heavy nor light. I have to say, you're writing is really unique. It's simple yet strong. I like it.

    It was just the first chapter and I already adore Laura. The way she cares for Tammy is cute. And I have to bring up how independent she is and kind. Her parents are wealthy, yet they can't send her to college. What an eye! :D

    You got a red and sub from me. I can't wait for more! Update soon yeah? :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 06:50pm