The Soprano - Comments

  • Orlei

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    I'm really glad you enjoyed it! You're right about both of the characters, they could've handled things differently, but I thought that making them overreact would make it more interesting.

    Also, I'm really happy that you liked A Kiss Before the Dawn :D Right now I'm going to update it with its next chapter!
    July 6th, 2012 at 04:45pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    Lord Kenton is a rather interesting person, to say the least. I also love how there's more to him than meets the eye. I also loved how you described his home with all the artworks, and how many of them should be in a museum. When Juliana had that thought about all of his artworks, I instantly thought of Vermeer's The Concert. The only reason I thought of it was because that painting was stolen from a museum and is one of the highest priced stolen artworks in the world.

    Anyway, I can understand where Juliana is coming from with how she fired back at Kenton when he criticized her. But, also, I don't think she handled it the right way. Yes, that may be a soft spot, especially considering she's never really been criticized before, but still, criticism can go a long way. As for Lord Kenton, because he's probably been working with vocal students for a long time more than likely, the criticism was called for, but also, he could have gone about it differently.

    As for the chapter leading up to Juliana's meeting of the mysterious Lord, I thought it was a nice layout and transition. I also found the parts where she was mentally asking herself how Kenton's butler got down to the gate to be rather hilarious. Smile

    ~Lady
    July 6th, 2012 at 03:42pm
  • Lady of the Moon

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    This is so heartbreaking, but beautiful at the same time. With the summary, this kind of reminds me of Violin by Anne Rice. I don't know if you've read that book before, but that's what instantly popped into my head when I read the summary. Smile Especially if her dead husband comes back and haunts her. Judging by what you've told me about this story, I'd have to make the assumption that he will be returning to her, in one form or the other.

    It's rather romantic and tragic, with him being dead and her still loving him. I actually really like it, because it's something that doesn't get done much on Mibba.

    I'm really looking forward to how this story gets developed, and what's in store for the heartbroken soprano. Smile

    ~Lady
    July 5th, 2012 at 02:44am
  • Lonesome58

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    Love the first chapters
    July 5th, 2012 at 12:32am