Stay With Me - Comments

This is adorable! Update soon?

I love this! Can't wait for an update!

That was insanely adorable. Can't wait for more.

Smiles. So many smiles. He's so cute!

Aww! Too freaking adorable. Ashdfrhgdhsajksd

Hearing this from Matt's words are too cute.

Update soon.

This is really really cute!
I can't wait to see what the next letter says!

So adorable, I can't wait for more.

So glad I found this story. More nisky stories should exist, too damn adorable.

Update soon!

i really like matts first letter its adorable and i cant wait to read the rest :]

Your names are very common, and used in stories a lot. I don't really like that. The prologue is short, but sweet and makes me want to read on, but then again, leaves me confused. i hope u did that on purpose. Other than that, it's great. I especially like the layout, but it would be nice if the txt wasn't so squished inside the box. :)

Well, the layout is the first impression. And I like yours, for the most part. The colors look really good with each other, and it's pretty easy to read. The only change I would make would be to make the text box just a teeny bit bigger so that words aren't nearly overflowing out of it.

Uh, I don't like hockey, at all, so I don't know the characters, and you haven't developed them enough yet for me to know them. This isn't that big of an issue, since this is only the prologue, but I hope you develop them more for people from comment swap like me.

No glaring grammatical errors, so that's always good.

Good luck! <3

Everything is technically perfect. The grammar and spelling have no real errors in it, so I commend you. Stuff like that shows you are serious about your writing. I can not predict what the rest of the story will be like but from the introduction it sounds like it will be and interesting piece :)

I love it already!! Cannot wait to read it!!

I'm hooked! *subscribes*

I love it already, I am so excited for it!

I love it! You shouldn't have been too worried about it being similar to my Sid stories. You're actually including things that happen outside what's in the letters, I don't. I"m really excited to read more! Keep it up, I can't wait!