Lover to Lover. - Comments

  • ChristineLRM

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    This was a great one-shot - I'd like to see it made into a full series! The Trying Times of Patrick Kane. :) Great job on the characterizations. I keep coming back and reading this.
    September 4th, 2012 at 10:01pm
  • toughenchilada

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    I really liked this story, there are a lot of good kane stories on here but yours is unique! The twist of him not getting what he wants but also not changing is realistic and thought-provoking. And I hadn't heard the song before but looked it up after reading this and loved it.
    July 30th, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • saudade.

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    That was not what I expected. But in a good way. Really.

    I love the way you had Patrick not getting what he wanted. And the fact that he just went back to his old ways was a nice twist. I love your writing style, it's very distinct. I also like that the song wasn't used in the story, instead it was based around it. The layout was simple and easy to read, for which I'm grateful.

    Great job all around and I should announce the winners by August 23rd!
    July 28th, 2012 at 09:02pm