hey so comment swap bought me here and clearly this is hunger games inspired i purposely try to stray away from these but read it anyway. I am liking it, i like the characters that you have established so far. But you need to explain things better like the whole parents leaving her at school and the fighting, (why & what kind of match). Also with things like "Drawing on my fire power" do they all have powers (are these of a supernatural kind?).
i hope you dont take all this the wrong way just trying to help and i am going to subscribe cause i do like it and i do want to see where you take this so good luck :)
I am liking it, i like the characters that you have established so far. But you need to explain things better like the whole parents leaving her at school and the fighting, (why & what kind of match).
Also with things like "Drawing on my fire power" do they all have powers (are these of a supernatural kind?).
i hope you dont take all this the wrong way just trying to help and i am going to subscribe cause i do like it and i do want to see where you take this so good luck :)