I'll Be There For You - Comments

I'm here from a comment swap. Although I'm not a One Direction fan whatsoever, I do think this story is written pretty well. So keep up with what you're doing.

I'm here from a comment swap. Although I'm not a One Direction fan whatsoever, I do think this story is written pretty well. So keep up with what you're doing.

The very first thing I want to say is that “You want to kiss me?” Ariana finally asks him, her heart racing at the mere thought. made me all sadlfjasldk;fjasdf. I’m a sucker for upfront characters I’m also a sucker for stories that have the future couple start off as best friends. And the way you ended it? Aww, that was cutesy with a bit of something else to it. Over all, it was lovely. He never thought of taking it further with her. She was his best friend; she used to just be the shoulder to cry on or the one he went to for girl troubles. Now, she was the girl that would be causing the troubles. A smile curls onto his lips through the kiss. Man, was he okay with that. The ending is oddly sexy. I was hoping that there was another chapter to read! This would be really cute as a full story. Just the thought of it makes me want to know what kind of trouble she’d cause for Niall! Thank you for entering :)

Hahaha!!! I love this! You are an amazing writer, did you know that! I love how your stories have diversity, they focus on many different things and that every single story is unique in its own way. This one had me smiling and cooing. Seriously.

Well, i'd love to point out how adorable Ariana and Niall is. Their banters are so kickass, like it showed us that they are comfortable with each other and that they are not afraid to be playful with one another.

My favorite quote,
"Because Irishmen are strong like bull." had me chuckling like there's no tomorrow. I literally read through that piece of dialogue like three times just because I seriously loved that part.

Well Irishmen are the sexiest and I think you did well on the Irish kid's dialect, although I'm not too sure of Niall himself, since I'm not that into 1D.

When Niall and Ariana kiss, it is like magic, it's beyond the sparks! It is everything Ive been anticipating for since the beginning of the story.

Good job on the story! Seriously, I really really like this!

I now have that song stuck in my head, haha. I love Friends, so as soon as I saw the title, I thought "Is this from the theme song?" I was right!

I'm not a 1D fan, but I thought this was a cute story. It was very well written, and I didn't catch any grammar/ spelling mistakes, which I always like. The pace of the story was nice, too, it didn't move too fast and it was easy to read and follow along with. You provide nice detail and dialouge to get a good idea of the relationship between the characters.

Well done, and good luck with your future writing!