My Dad's a Rockstar? - Comments

  • lonely girl.

    lonely girl. (250)

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    Hi. From Band Fan-Fiction. I found your story to be quite fast paced, with many time jumps. It was a very quick read and you were very straight to the point. However, you left quite a bit to the imagination with very few/short descriptions, and were quite repetitive when characters were talking, and in general word choice. Your spelling was neat and I don't think there were very many mistakes, but your grammar is in need of a touch up. If I can say one thing, commas! They are your best friend, especially when writing dialogue.

    Brownie points to you for the custom layout, though I found it harsh on my eyes and quite difficult to read as I got onto the later chapters.
    September 13th, 2013 at 05:56am
  • uniqueluver20

    uniqueluver20 (100)

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    damn cliffhanger -.- im dying to see what happens next update soon
    July 28th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • uniqueluver20

    uniqueluver20 (100)

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    love it update soon <3
    July 21st, 2012 at 02:31am
  • andrea weekes

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    interesting story!update as soon as u can!cant wait for the next chapter.
    July 12th, 2012 at 03:50pm
  • kpoplove

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    i love it <3
    July 11th, 2012 at 01:25am