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  • OMGzgirl

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    Comment Swap bought me here. I'm liking this so far. You have details ans you don't immediately go into the story. It leaves me wondering and wanting more. The last chapter made me curious to what she's like and I think you should definitely update soon.
    August 14th, 2012 at 01:43am
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    totally hooked. i love this c:
    July 27th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • lozzieee who.

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    This story had me hooked, right from the summary. I love the idea and the premise, and the use of actual de3finitions at the head of your chapters. Your spelling and grammar are practically impeccable, and your writing flows wonderfully. Your character is nice and enigmatic, yet nicely described as well. I'm subscribing to this story because it's bloody damn good :)
    July 16th, 2012 at 05:49pm
  • Dom.

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    I love your layout! Simple but yet cute and it's easy for the reader to read your story.
    Speaking of story, I love the intros to the chapters. I don't know why but I find it intriging how you put definitions. My favorite part of this was in the first paragraph of chapter 1. I like how you compared ideas using their opposites.
    As for grammar and mistakes, you're all good! :D Nothing was spelled wrong from what I saw and every punctuation mark was where it needed to be.
    Great job! Subscribing :) I can't wait for more!
    July 11th, 2012 at 12:09pm
  • toasteh.toast

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    I really like this so far! It's very intriguing and I'm very curious as to what this is going to be about. I mean, I have an idea, but I can't be sure! haha
    I find with your story, even though the chapters are short so far, something draws me to it! It has a certain, je ne sais quoi. From what I see, you have no punctuation, grammar or spelling errors. That's a breath of fresh air for me. There is something about your writing, it has dimension. It is believeable and you write in a way that people can understand.
    I'm surprised that something like this has my interest, because I wouldn't think that I would like this kind of thing. But I do, and that's why I love the comment swap! I'm very picky about original stories, but this one seems pretty unique from what I have seen so far.
    Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see where you take this!
    July 11th, 2012 at 09:07am
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