Never Lost a War - Comments

This, from now on, is one of my favorite fics.

Clark is beautiful. He is beautifuckingful. Ugh. I just started reading this on the recommendations of my best friends squees yesterday about it. Shit man. I love it.

Had to comment bc Clark though wow.

faaaaaaaaave ❤❤❤

THIS OH MY GOOD LORD I JUST READ ALL OF THIS AND IT'S MY NEW FAVOURITE I LOVE IT SO MUCH

I LOVELOVELOVED THIS KELLER AND ZACK AW YES AND THE JALEX THE SWEET KISSES AND HONEST WORDS WERE MY FAVE BUT GAH HOW COULD YOU NOT WRITE THE SMUT SCENE AFTER ALL THAT FRUSTRATION

ALEX WAS THE LAST PERSON TO HOLD HIS HAND WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME I OFFICIALLY LOVE CHAPTER TEN AND EMO JACK

I'M GONNA VOMIT FROM HOW CUTE CHAPTER EIGHT IS AT THE END RIAN AND ZACK ARE SO FUNNY AND I DON'T WANT JACK TO BE DRUNK AND ANGRY BUT ALEX'S NOTE JUST MADE IT ALL BETTER AND I HOPE IT CHEERED JACK UP A LITTLE

I am so sorry for the next time you log on, okay, like, if ever, hopefully you will, but I'm sorry.

CHAPTER SEVEN ALEX IS ALL HAPPY WITH NINA AND NOW JACK'S THE DEPRESSED ONE and poor zack too jesus christ

but this is still so funny god i love it

oh my gosh chapter SIX poor alex all upset and cranky over jack and i usduhj

"He looks a little frantic-eyed, and he clings on to Jack's arm in a way Jack doesn't think he can describe as anything but possessive." AND THEN THE PART WHERE HE SAYS HE JUST WORRIES ABOUT JACK AHHHH. I'm glad Clark was sensible because no Jack you will not fuck him.

The fourth chapter was amazing, I was bouncing in my seat at Keller telling Jack about Alex flirting at the end and just jhgkrd yeah. You're like me with the visual aids and the rambling A/Ns, we need to be friends. And yes I will leave a comment per chapter, that's just how I do it.

Chapter three is hilarious and this is already one of my new favourite stories.

"Alex sends Jack a withering look, which is really not okay because despite what Alex might think, he is not actually Jack's mother." -- I died.

The second chapter was beautiful, ah! I love Alex's French, it gives me tingles. Jack is very crude and wonderful.

I just read the first chapter and I am so so so in love with this already. Onwards I go.

I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS STORY FOREVER!! I love it so much

Just read the whole thing!!! I love it :) can't wait to read the sequel!!!

The ending was perfection. Also yay zack and Keller! Please tell me when the sequel is posted!

this whole thing is so cute wow. I'd love a sequel

A sequel would be pretty damn sweet :D

I love this first off! But I think you should end it at like 15 because the conflict seems to be mostly resolved. I think you should tie up some loose strings and create Keller as an OC in another story but personally I think it's too much when authors start throwing plot twist after plot twist and constant conflicts. This is a well-rounded ending and I think any other ideas should be used for another story which I'd gladly read! That being said, if you continue this, please make sure Alex and Jack end up together happily ever after etc etc? Thanks and awesome writing by the way, I love this a lot!