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  • Moo I Love You

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    I, to be honest, absolutely hate One Direction, but I absolutely love the story. The way you built Sammy's background just amazed me. I loved coming across a character with the same name as me. I have only read the first chapter so far but it surprisingly hooked me from the start. This is so much better than most One Direction Fan Fictions I have read. I will definitely keep reading later! :)
    August 3rd, 2014 at 10:19am
  • fault_in_our_stars

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    This story hooked me from the beginning. You have a very unique way of writing. You have the ability to intrigue your reader to continue reading, which if you didn't already know, is quite a hard task. Good job, and good luck with your further writing career :)
    July 1st, 2014 at 08:05am
  • fault_in_our_stars

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    This story hooked me from the beginning. You have a very unique way of writing. You have the ability to intrigue your reader to continue reading, which if you didn't already know, is quite a hard task. Good job, and good luck with your further writing career :)
    July 1st, 2014 at 08:05am
  • HeartRate

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    Firstly, I don't normally read One Direction fanfictions, but this was nice. I'll give you props for spending so much time on Sam's background story and just over all giving her a basis for her character. I've only read the first nine chapters, but I'm really interested to see were this story goes. Also, your layout goes well with the story without making it...predictable? I don't know, every time I spot a 1D fan-fic I expect pictures of the boys plastered all over. But it's a good thing, in my book, that you didn't. It makes your story appear original. Anyway, this is very nice and I hope you continue to wright more stuff :3
    April 13th, 2013 at 04:45pm
  • FLAREBEARR

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    gah its been 4 months you should update. I miss it.
    March 24th, 2013 at 12:46am
  • Chelsea's Dead Smile

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    Hi! From Comment Swap!
    I didn't read anything of your story, because I wouldn't be a front runner for a One Direction concert, but I have nothing against the guys that make up One Direction. It seems that the people that have read it do like it so I will encourage you to continue your story so they can continue to enjoy it.
    March 20th, 2013 at 03:40pm
  • dream'n.reality.

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    Wow, I honestly did not think that I would be reading a one direction fanfiction. I like how you use an abundant amount of description. Unlike most stories that just explain a few things with their dialogue. It was slightly hard to remember the names, and who they were but I caught on. Nice work.
    December 21st, 2012 at 01:25am
  • gominnie

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    I really liked this actually and I'm not even that big of a 1D fan. I liked it so much I subscribed! The beginning was sad :c I can't believe how she went through all of that with the Mr. Gifford. I like the plot, and I can't wait to read more!
    December 18th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • keeperofthewoods

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    I really like this story a lot!
    October 20th, 2012 at 03:17am
  • besidethesea.

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    I really like this story and freaked out when I saw the layout :) lol Update soon please?? :)
    October 3rd, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • luke ham ham.

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    I love this so far! This is sooo good!
    I can't wait for more. Update soon?:D
    October 3rd, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • bloodyvengeance

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    Oh yeah also I really want to see how her relationship with the new family will grow.

    So please update soon! :D
    September 29th, 2012 at 06:57pm
  • bloodyvengeance

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    I'm going to be honest I do not listen to 1D or even come close to being a fan.
    But I really like your plot, Liam's and Sam's relationship its adorable.
    Cant wait to read more :)
    September 29th, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • Brian Dales

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    I so happy that comment swap sent me here because I am in love with this story now!
    I love how you've written everything so far, and cannot wait to see where you take it :) x
    And I love the Sammy and Liam interactions, because they're just way too sweet and make me wish I had a twin haha
    August 29th, 2012 at 06:15am
  • FLAREBEARR

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    Just saw this and thanks for updating. It was really good!
    August 22nd, 2012 at 06:02am
  • Diiggeehh

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    Comment Swap sent me here! I gotta say, i was very sad at the beginning. D: but I thought that this was a great story, and well written. Good luck with this story! I liked how you made young Liam, it was cute. :] <3
    August 19th, 2012 at 07:39am
  • FLAREBEARR

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    not from comment swap but I absolutely love this story please update soon!

    Mr. Green Mr. Green
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:42am
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Hey, here from Comment Swap.

    I`m not going to lie, I was seriously hurting for Sam with the whole thing with the newspaper guy! I can`t believe that she put up with that for that long without telling anyone! I couldn`t even imagine being in her shoes :`(
    You have a very interesting concept here. It kind of confused me when you jumped from third person to first (though you did warn that in your author`s comments on the previous chapter). Also, just pointing something out, that in your summary, you are speaking third person and then have a first person line in there. Might wanna fix that.
    I absolutely hated the suitcase guy (what a jerk!) and totally love Alex so far! <3
    Not a crazy 1D fan, but you have a very interesting story started here and I wish you the best of luck on it!
    August 12th, 2012 at 10:00pm
  • thebodyeclectic

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    I like One Direction, though not overly, but I don't tend to read 1D fanfictions. However, the idea behind your story was very original so that's always a plus. There were a few grammatical and word errors, but every story has those, so don't worry (: It doesn't change the fact that you've got real talent. Your layout makes it a bit hard on the eyes though, and the background image isn't really relevant to the story. I'd suggest proofreading before you post to catch those tiny mistakes.

    I like what I read though, and you should definitely keep writing this story (:
    Good luck!
    August 10th, 2012 at 04:37am
  • aDreamersKiss

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    Not a huge One Direction fan, but I thought your story was pretty good. It was well written and there wasn't any major gramatical mistakes. A few, but nothing major :) I agree with one of the comments below with the ages. That kind of threw me off a bit. Anyway, keep writing :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 05:03am