I just read the first chapter of your story and I REALLY like it! I sort of know the band Hollywood Undead, but not much. I thought the idea for your story was AMAZING. Like, I'm so jealous that I didn't come up with something amazing like that. I love Hannah's character and how she is portrayed and I love love love Johnny's character omg. And your layout is freaking beautiful omg.
Anyhow, love your story. Hope you have a great day and everything! Feel free to check out some of my stuff, if you want!
omg im in love with this story! i know you havent updated this in like a year, but i have a REALLY good idea for the next chapter!!! please, i dont know if you still look at these comments, but please, i would like to get my idea out to you :)
Oh my gosh. I found your story through the comment swap and THANK GOD I DID because I am seriously so obsessed. I read the first chapter and before I knew it I was all caught up. Ahhh please update soon and don't abandon this story because it is SO good. I hate Father Brinks so much I just can't stand him... so looking forward to a showdown between him and Johnny. Haha Johnny better kick his ass!
On a side note, I think the writing style has gotten better and better each chapter. If you get a chance to you might want to take a second look and edit the first two chapters, not the plot but maybe just add some detail and revisions. But you should finish the story first because I NEED to know what happens!
Just reading the summary, I knew I was sold. As a believer of the saying "Opposites attract", I fell in love with the idea of good girl Hannah and Johnny together. This story is great! :)
Comment Swap Ah, It's been so long since I've read a J3T story I like this. It's different from what I normally find And most of the fan fictions here are..well boring So I'm really happy that someone's doing something New and not being afraid to cut corners and step Out of their comfort zone! Wonderful job!
YEEEEEEES!I am so very happy you updated this!It's been awhile.I have had a bad day but seeing that this had been updated made it better!I understand Johnny being upset that his sister didn't tell him about Vengeance or Danny,but he loves her so I am sure all he needs is to cool down and everything will be ok.Aaaaw! They made love!That really is cute for those two!I hope everything works out for them.They are perfect for eachother!Like I said,this made my day.I hope you update again soon!I can't wait =)
o_O holy shit dude! i loved this chapter! i so was not expecting Father Brinks to pull something like that, given he's a priest or whatever. the part with the Huntington guys was a little scary and i love how Johnny's so protective of everyone.
so...this is a fan-fiction...heh...wouldn't've guessed.. Anyway, that said, I read what I saw as an original fiction and, I must say, it's not half-bad. You've got a good style, and the atmosphere's good too. Overall, it's interesting, and I wish you luck n_n~*