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  • Defying Failure

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    Dear lord update please.
    June 7th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • LucyLove

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    Great story!
    June 7th, 2013 at 06:29pm
  • wildeyedjokers

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    I love this so much and I don't know why! I feel like I'm addicted to this story already. I really hope you update soon cuz I can't wait to see what happens :)
    October 16th, 2012 at 09:56am
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Well now... My prediction is wrong and do much worse than I thought -.- You've left me with a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach. Can't wait for the next chapter! And congrats in the job Mr. Green
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:58pm
  • Join the Masquerade

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    Gerard, you twat. Now look what you've gone and done -_-
    That was brilliant, as per usual :) One thing I recommend for you is to maybe get a beta because you have small errors that you haven't picked up on through reading it yourself:

    "She had never said anything about being about to see people’s faces clearly by just hearing their voice."

    and a few simple grammatical errors. :)
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:44pm
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    Someone going to get in shit tonight i can tell
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:27pm
  • Massacre Smile!

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    Aww I hope Lacey doesn't get beaten :( but awesome job by far!!!!!!
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:14pm
  • deactivatedError

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    Aww he called her I hope her dad decides to tell her
    August 8th, 2012 at 11:02pm
  • deactivatedError

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    Dude I freaking love this I soooo wanna see what happens when they meet face to face :D
    August 8th, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    I feel bad for her and the relationship she has with her parents. I really wish they'd shape up for her sake. On another note.... Is he going to call her when she's half asleep?! o.O
    August 7th, 2012 at 02:20am
  • Join the Masquerade

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    How DARE he not call her. Just... how dare he...
    I can't wait to see his side of all this...
    August 7th, 2012 at 02:06am
  • Join the Masquerade

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    *recommends*
    *subscribes*

    This is amsolutely amazing. I adore the way you write and how naturally their relationship is growing. It causes an ache somewhere deep down for me because I met a guy 3 years older than me on the internet when I was younger, who was quite damaged and spoke pretty much exactly as your Gerard speaks online. It's heartbreaking, but really nice for me to read.

    Thank you for this. Please continue to update :) I will be reccing this in other Gee Way stories of mine because it's just that damn good, haha.

    Teenie weenie thing I noticed is that you should probably go over your work after you write it. You have a fair few silly mistakes and errors, and a confusion between 'to' and 'too'.

    I'm going to the bathroom, because I ate too much pie.

    But it doesn't take away from the story so don't stress too much. :)
    August 7th, 2012 at 01:19am
  • untitledusername

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    This story is absolutely amazing, I love Gerard in this story too! You've portrayed his character very well, I love how he's a mixture of an outcast, extremely sexy, alcohol and drug abuser, party animal, porn addict yet he seems to be falling for a sweet, innocent girl he's met over the net, very interesting. Cannot wait to read more, and that was so damn cute how they both said they were dying to hug one another, aww. Loving it, update soon xxx
    August 1st, 2012 at 09:10pm
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Meh. You have no reason to apologize for whatever reason. This chapter was great and I can't wait for them to meet :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 04:07pm
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    meet sorry
    August 1st, 2012 at 10:39am
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    meet sorry
    August 1st, 2012 at 10:39am
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    There going to me :)
    August 1st, 2012 at 10:39am
  • Lithium_Sorrows

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    I like
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • AH-Pika-Chews-Youh!

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    Normally I'd yell at you for not updating. But, this is under different circumstances. That sounded gruesome (new favourite word!)! And I hope you're better, and shall be updating more often! :D

    xo Pika.
    July 28th, 2012 at 03:05pm
  • Miss.J.isamonster

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    Oh holy mint chips, that's awful :S Sorry to hear about that! Least you're okay and ready for childbirth whenever that happens! Always a bright side!

    Just started reading the story today. It's fantastic :D
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:08am