I love this so much and I don't know why! I feel like I'm addicted to this story already. I really hope you update soon cuz I can't wait to see what happens :)
Well now... My prediction is wrong and do much worse than I thought -.- You've left me with a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach. Can't wait for the next chapter! And congrats in the job
Gerard, you twat. Now look what you've gone and done -_- That was brilliant, as per usual :) One thing I recommend for you is to maybe get a beta because you have small errors that you haven't picked up on through reading it yourself:
"She had never said anything about being about to see people’s faces clearly by just hearing their voice."
I feel bad for her and the relationship she has with her parents. I really wish they'd shape up for her sake. On another note.... Is he going to call her when she's half asleep?! o.O
This is amsolutely amazing. I adore the way you write and how naturally their relationship is growing. It causes an ache somewhere deep down for me because I met a guy 3 years older than me on the internet when I was younger, who was quite damaged and spoke pretty much exactly as your Gerard speaks online. It's heartbreaking, but really nice for me to read.
Thank you for this. Please continue to update :) I will be reccing this in other Gee Way stories of mine because it's just that damn good, haha.
Teenie weenie thing I noticed is that you should probably go over your work after you write it. You have a fair few silly mistakes and errors, and a confusion between 'to' and 'too'.
I'm going to the bathroom, because I ate too much pie.
But it doesn't take away from the story so don't stress too much. :)
This story is absolutely amazing, I love Gerard in this story too! You've portrayed his character very well, I love how he's a mixture of an outcast, extremely sexy, alcohol and drug abuser, party animal, porn addict yet he seems to be falling for a sweet, innocent girl he's met over the net, very interesting. Cannot wait to read more, and that was so damn cute how they both said they were dying to hug one another, aww. Loving it, update soon xxx
Normally I'd yell at you for not updating. But, this is under different circumstances. That sounded gruesome (new favourite word!)! And I hope you're better, and shall be updating more often! :D