When Doves Cry - Comments

Gonna be messing around with the background of my layout, so if you happen to be reading it while I have my fun, just know that you're not, in fact, crazy.

beautiful

I love this! And Roxi is so awesome. :D

Amazing Update. Truly. your writing just makes my day.

was wonderful(: Update soon. I love your stories and i LOVE sirius so this story is just a win win for me(:

Thanks for the tips! I have considered changing the layout, I agree it's a bit difficult to read easily. I'll get to that as soon as I stop pinning Harry Potter and Doctor Who stuff on Pinterest (I'm addicted)... Will try out changes with the spaces and add more details!
Much, much, much thanks for subscribing! (:

Hello! Quick suggestion, love. The layout is a bit tough to read(less hot pink, maybe, or a different background), and your dialogue needs spaces between it, like typing enter twice after the first character speaks. Buuuuuut, try writing less dialogue and more info, instead of strictly characters talking back and forth. Give us the deets, man! You know what I mean. I'm sure you'll get a lot more readers and comments, as some mibbians are picky picky and may have decided not to read it because it was tough. I'm subscribed, though! :D

Great chapter(: Update again soon.

Its a wonderful story c: i cant wait for the next update.