Bittersweet - Comments

oops there goes my pants
this is so well written and so sexy,
and good god i wish matt was my sexy big neighbour :(
well done!

I want to officially congratulate you, as I've finished the judging. You have placed 2nd in my contest and will be able to claim 3 prizes from the prize list on the contest page. :)

@ i am rock and roll.
Wow, I'm like... speechless. I was totally caught by surprise by this, and I'm super flattered that you enjoyed it so much. :3

Oh hello there, this is ronnie radke. I've since changed my username, which I do quite frequently. I've finally found the time to get down to some judging on my contest!

First off, layout, you get 5/5 points for it. It was lovely. I adored it. The girl in the photo was lovely and hello, M. Shadows. Enough said. ;)

5/5 points for proper grammar, I saw no mistakes or flaws within your writing which is faaaaaaantastic.

8/10 points for using the song in an interesting way. I was expecting smut from this, which the pervert in me was excited about, and I was excited to see that it was well written smut. But a couple of more references to the song could have given you a full 10 points. Otherwise, lovely. :)

5/5 points for interest factor. Couldn't tear my eyes away, though I frequently had to change tabs 'cause my mom was nosing around wanting to know what I was reading. So you know if I didn't want my mother reading it, it was that good!

Bonus Points:

+2 for using M. Shadows, cause he's gorg and sexy and stuff and just fab in general.
+2 for getting your entry in with haste.
+2 for making me shiver when Matt told Kaylah that he was going to ravish her all night.

Overall, this entry was lovely. Your final score is 29/25. Good job! Yours is the first I've judged, but I have a feeling that you've got a lovely chance of placing. Thanks so much for entering!

This is awesome. And since my name is Kaylah, I was blushing the whole time lol

I absoutely loved this! It was very well written like all of your work which I love. I would not mind at all having Matt as my neighbor, haha :)