Loved Him Like A Winter Bird - Comments

  • Flowerr

    Flowerr (100)

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    Woops! lol I thought it was coming up with the Custom Layout....
    July 25th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • I Feel Like Koda

    I Feel Like Koda (100)

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    Okay... Comment swap brought me here but your prologue is screwed up... In the summary it seems like it'll be a very good story, but uh.. You may want to take this story off of comment swap because I mean... I can't read the prologue. It's all squished together and it's one blurry line so I would recommend working on your layout THEN putting something up BESIDES the prologue, at least a few chapters, then putting this on comment swap. Because even if you had the prologue up, it'd be kind of hard to give a noteworthy comment on just the prologue.
    July 25th, 2012 at 12:39am